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Review of chapter "Come on now, sugar" from BuffyKaibaHunt
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Neat! Very awesome, as well as very well-written, too. I like it. And I especially like this part the best:

Amy laughed while Dawn roughly pulled Faith into the hall and kicked the door closed.

"What up, D?"

"Lay off of him."

"What?"

"Seriously, back off with the big sister routine. I don't need a chastity belt."

"I don't know what you mean." But Faith's smirk suggested otherwise.

"I'd kinda LIKE Draco's hands on me, ok?"

Xander walked by then and made a face. He'd previously made his feelings on Dawn's latest crush known. He wanted no details... ever. He plugged his fingers in his ears and started a litany of "La la la. I'm not listening." as he continued on.

Faith smirked a bit wider, crossed her arms across her chest, and leaned back against the opposite wall. "Is that so?"

"It is so. Hands... all over. I happen to like him. We're gonna watch some TV tonight, and then I'm inviting him up to my room for a bit."

Faith stopped looking so casual and pushed off of the wall. "Dawn-"

"What are you gonna do, Faith? Tell Buffy? What's she gonna do? I'm an adult. So's Draco. We're both consenting adults. I plan on consenting to quite a lot with Draco, so again, seriously, back off about it."

"I did not just hear that. I did not just hear that." Another voice said from behind Dawn.

She turned to see Giles cleaning his glasses rather furiously.

"Xander?" He asked.

"That way and to the left." Dawn pointed.

"Thank you. Do carry on... after I've left." Giles hurried off then.

Dawn turned back to Faith with a glare and hands on her hips. "So are we gonna let Dawn have her fun with the snotty wizard boy?"

"Spike's right. You get more wicked scary every day."

Dawn winked up her nose with a fake smile and narrowed eyes of smug victory. "Best you remember that."

That said, Dawn strolled back into the room.

"Thank Merlin." Draco muttered as soon as she stepped inside.

"What's up?"

"Besides that twat prattling on about Captain Jack Harkness and Dr. Who Nine? Amy wouldn't allow me any popcorn until yourself and Faith returned."

Dawn looked at Amy. "Let him have some popcorn."

Amy grinned in that silly way she had about her and waved her hand. The bowl floated over to Draco. Dawn glared at Amy as Draco plucked the bowl from the air.

"What?" Amy asked, looking slightly pouty.

"The magic for stuff you could do on your own steam."

"It's just a bowl." Draco said. "Our friend Amy is not evil. She's merely a bit wicked."

"No, I get it." Amy said with a sad grin. "Sorry, Dawn."

Amy didn't want to piss Dawn off. She knew how Dawn felt about that stuff. Hell, some of the Scoobies still held her responsible for Willow's slide into the dark. After all, hadn't Amy been the one to take Willow to Rack?

Dawn and Faith had been the first ones within the council to accept her trying to help. They were the first ones to be her friends. They understood that she had not and probably would not always choose the exact right course because she was human. Willow was still a bit iffy, but she had not immediately booted Amy out this time. Andrew had been the next to befriend her, the annoying little geek. He'd said people trying to atone needed to stick together. Now it seemed she had added Draco Malfoy to her very short list of friends.

Brilliant! :)
Keep up your super-neat, very creative and phenomenally beautiful writing! :)
Review By [BuffyKaibaHunt] • Date [10 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Come on now, sugar" from siannasilver
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I loved it, but it was to short!! A complete story with this wrapped in...approx 250,000 words. That's what I want for Xmas, pretty please?
Review By [siannasilver] • Date [11 Dec 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Come on now, sugar" from Bunney
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Everyone should have a veronica marathon!!!!

later and love
Bunney
Review By [Bunney] • Date [29 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Come on now, sugar" from Emmy
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This is a bunch of lovely fun. :D
Review By [Emmy] • Date [27 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Come on now, sugar" from Zira
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Nicely done...as usual! If I wasn't so in awe, I think I'd be about a little bit of the jealous stuff! Love, Zira xxx
Review By [Zira] • Date [18 Oct 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Come on now, sugar" from WinterRayne
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OMG. People think I'm crazy because I burst out laughing ,right in the middle of class, when I read the "I love Dick" part. I love Andrew.
Review By [WinterRayne] • Date [18 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Come on now, sugar" from (Current Donor)romero
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What a mixture of friends! I'm glad that Dawn is showing her inner wickedness with Draco. I had to laugh at Xander and Giles's attitude when hearing Dawn's plans.
Review By [(Current Donor)romero] • Date [18 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Come on now, sugar" from Vld
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*Bubbling in laughter* Excellent as always! Andrew still pretending he's not gay? Well, maybe bi, but it is my belief that the girls he dated in Italia were just him being in Egypt lol!
Review By [Vld] • Date [18 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Come on now, sugar" from rivrgrl
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Andrew has foot and mouth disease. or maybe just a really bad case of Brain to Mouth shortage.. but I do how ever agree with him about Doctor Who.. there is just something about Christopher *i think it's the ears* that I just heart. then again that whole season was just awe.. 'I Could save the world but lose you.' 'What good are emotions if you can't save the woman you love?' 'I want you safe. My Doctor.' though Tennat is yum... oh and all together very lol.. specially Xander and his not listening bit
Review By [rivrgrl] • Date [18 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Come on now, sugar" from wickedness
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"Seen it? I BREATHE it. Veronica's my girl." Seriously, I just watched VM and... BASICALLY... That's the perfect statement for people who watch Veronica Mars. You get so attached to her so easily. And I loved, "BIG L, little O, BIG V, little e." Ships can get so ludicrous sometimes, but we squee anyways.
Review By [wickedness] • Date [18 Oct 06] • Not Rated
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