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Loyalties: A Father Goose Tale

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Review of chapter "Epilogue: Where all roads lead." from BrownFinderth
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Great installment!! Well written and I'm eager to read the next part of the story! I am worried about Syd going undercover at Wolfram and Hart!! Though I do agree with Eric and Will about becoming watchers!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [8 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue: Where all roads lead." from (Current Donor)Katrina
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Just adding my two cents of "Yay story!" It was an excellent, entrancing read. Nicely done!
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [25 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue: Where all roads lead." from (Recent Donor)DeacBlue
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I liked it a lot. Characterization, pacing, grammar and spelling all good. I never watched Alias, but you brought the characters to life, and Mixed them well, without degrading any character's power, or making anyone a Betty Sue. Very good job.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeacBlue] • Date [29 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue: Where all roads lead." from Naitch
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I just wanted to say this was an excellent story. I read it at work all day today, which turned out to be a good thing because the sceen in the apartment when Weiss, Vaughn and Dixon were all taken down by Dawn, Dwayne, and Dennis helped pull me out of a bout of depression that had set in. Great storytelling, top notch job.
Review By [Naitch] • Date [7 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: There's a delegation a-coming." from ticky
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awesome
Review By [ticky] • Date [9 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue: Where all roads lead." from Dragonelf
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Really good story.

::Starts reading the next story in the series::


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The most beautiful thing we can experience
is the mysterious; It is the source of all
true art and science
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [2 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15: A Bristow Family Vacation" from Dragonelf
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For some reason when I noticed you used the name Enrique in this chapter I got a small Terminator II flashback, I wonder why.

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St Jerome - the patron saint of librarians and
scholars. St. Jerome is probably the correct
saint to pray to when your computer seems to
have evaporated a 25,000-word manuscript.
- Unknown
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [1 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue: Where all roads lead." from ThatGirlOverThere
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amazing story, absolutely amazing. you are one of my favorite authors.
Review By [ThatGirlOverThere] • Date [28 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue: Run, Sydney, Run" from SpacedCadet
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Very very good!

Loved it all.

Thank you.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [23 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue: Where all roads lead." from stasa
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Loved it even more then the first story in the series.
I especially loved you keeping Weiss in the slayer world, and "seeing" Denis play a part in their life's, always found him entertaining in the show.
Faith's talk with Irina came quite unexpected, but not un-welcomed. It was nice seeing how deep her connection is to Angel, and the impact he really had on her life.
So, once again, good job, you wrote a great story and I loved reading it...
Review By [stasa] • Date [20 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue: Where all roads lead." from DavidFraser
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Yes !!

Well Done ! A great sequel to the first story, more involved, expanded, and just as good a read as I could have asked for...

Brilliant !!

(Can you tell that I liked it?)
Review By [DavidFraser] • Date [3 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue: Where all roads lead." from Marcel
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WOOT! Congratulations!!
Review By [Marcel] • Date [31 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue: Where all roads lead." from ColonelPeroxide
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Another great story in the series! I enjoyed it thoroughly despite the fact that I hate Alias as a show.

The only thing I had a bit of a problem with was the poetic licence you took about the reality of life in a regime state like Cuba. And getting a Hummer in there and driving it around - way to be discrete! :) Hence rating of "only" 9 points. But then, maybe you have to have lived in a regime to understand/imagine what it's like for the locals and what is possible and what isn't. And so not the point of this story.
Comments from author:
Thanks for your comments.

Your comment re the Hummer duly noted, although in some sense that was the point. In my, admittedly limited (and non-Cuban) experience what is possible for the "locals" and what is possible for the privileged class are not the same thing.

I feel safe in assuming a certain amount of corruption in all governments, but I can see that a less ostentatious display might be more realistic. ...
Review By [ColonelPeroxide] • Date [30 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue: Where all roads lead." from (Current Donor)Shieldage
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--But Faith wouldn’t understand that, she thought, for her it was simple, see monster kill monster. Never the temptation to become one. She would have no insight into Sydney’s dilemma, there was no need to trouble her.
--“Nah,” she said, “I don’t want to tell you, either.”
--“That’s cool,” Faith said, “Cigar?”

Excellent irony.


--There were things to give Clive Barker nightmares, or perhaps a hard-on. Or, of course, possibly both.

Completely awesome line. I have at least one demonic porn comicbook with an introduction by him and it fits. Have a bunch of his books too :)


Excellent use and creation of demons, nice intro by Lorne. Great payoff for the suspense about the book.

Marshall and Carrie are cute. Hmm, Weiss is an interesting character. Thanks for introducing me to Alias as seen through your eyes. Great geography too :)

Poor commando team ;)

Go Dennis!

So much stuff here that lays the foundation for 'Secrets'... awesome and thank you for writing :)
Comments from author:
Thanks for your comments. And for reminding about the Clive Barker line which I'd forgotten... Very good writer.... I saw a documentary on him a while back, drawings he'd done as a kid and so on .... and thank god the man has artistic outlets, you know?
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [4 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue: Where all roads lead." from Ansku
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I love it :)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [1 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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