Review of chapter "Willpower" from MarcusSLazarus
Interesting and dramatic bit of work, even if a bit overly dark and mysterious at first regarding who was meant to be who (Although the subsequent revelation of their respective identities definitely worked).
Still, the confrontation as the present ‘team’ has to stop their future selves corrupting Earth was definitely dramatic, even without the added ‘destiny’ implications of the crisis that they were attempting to prevent, and the ‘Willow-VS-Willow’ confrontation at the end was EXCELLENT (To say nothing of the sequel-related implications, although I have to wonder if ‘Will’ would revert back to her old self if she’s away from the necklace for long enough)
Review By [MarcusSLazarus
] • Date [5 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Willpower" from arkeus
wow, very good. You made will a bit too weak in an actual fight, but i guess it was the only way.
Comments from author:
Well, by the time it got to the actual fight she no longer had the necklace to rely on -- and she'd been relying on it for quite a while. Still a "hopped-up uberwitch," just not able to take on everyone put together.
Rob aka Mediancat
Review By [arkeus
] • Date [23 Oct 06] • Not Rated