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Review of chapter "The Killer Within" from Trace
Ooooh...I like this so far. Can't wait to see where you go with it.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.

I had a bit of writer's block on it where I know what I want to happen, but I just can't get it from my head to the paper. Hopefully the end will be up soon, maybe a day or two.

Glad you like it!
Review By [Trace] • Date [15 Nov 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Killer Within" from Bobboky
very cool, i hope to see more
Comments from author:
more will be coming in a day or so (if all goes according to plan that is)

Glad you like it.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [13 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Killer Within" from (Moderator)Demona
Checking my Latest page and getting a PM from you in the forums this morning has totally made my morning! Thanks so much for taking the time to write out your plot bunny. I know that my request wasn't the easiest to write but I appreciate you taking up the challenge!

Poor Faith, after all those years of fighting and redemption she accidentally kills a man. Fortunately, it seems, for her that it was Adam rather than a regular human. The fact still remains that she did kill him, but hopefully it should ease her mind knowing that he didn't stay dead.

I love Adam and Faith - they would make such a wonderful team.

As awful as it sounds I'm looking forward to that second chapter to see what kind of gloom and doom you have given me and the rest of the readers!

Thanks again, Kayla, for taking the time.

Comments from author:
I've got some gloom and doom coming in the form of....

Wait, I think I better just surprise you. ;-)

Glad you enjoyed!
Review By [(Moderator)Demona] • Date [23 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Killer Within" from jupitersdaughter
i love it! there aren't many good faith fics out there, and fewer with her and adam. this is wonderful and i can't wait for more
Comments from author:
Thanks for the nod. This is my first attempt at writing a Faith-centered story after normally focusing on Xander or Dawn. As for Adam... I heart him. *sigh* I'm never sure if I capture him right, but it has been around 10 years since I watched him on TV... (scary how time flies)

Hopefully you're still on board when I add the second chapter. A not happy ending and character death was requested so I will try to deliver it.

Thanks for the review!
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [23 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Killer Within" from Cutiepie
It's dark, but I am sorry to hear/read that there was a specific request for "no happy ending". Could it be an ambivalent ending? I don't like sad endings so much, but I'm liking this story so far. Can't wait for the second part.
Comments from author:
I don't want to give away anything, but the ending will be somewhat sad. I don't think I could ever write a true death and destruction to the world ending, but this will have some death at the end.

Thanks for the review and I'll try to go back to some more up beat stories next. Of course my next story deals with Vietnam, so...
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [23 Oct 06] • Not Rated
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