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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cptquinn
Review:
I always wanted to see this scene where someone says the words correctly, before touching ANY of the books. The 2 fake books vanish, and Ash is standing there smacking his forehead. =p
Review By [cptquinn] • Date [4 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Difdi
Review:
Well, even if she hadn't tried to fudge the third word, she already botched the first two, so given what happened to Ash for fudging one, what happens if you blow all three?

Klaatu Verada Nicto!
Review By [Difdi] • Date [30 Mar 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dragonelf
Review:
Faith you are in deep trouble now.

I hope you get inspired to write a sequel.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [14 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from spideythreeK
Review:
That's what she gets for not listening to Ash. Great story.
Comments from author:
Ash is a wise, wise man and all should heed his words!
Lol!
"Shot Smart, Shop S-Mart."
Review By [spideythreeK] • Date [12 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Figures :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [23 Oct 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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