I enjoyed this fic. The plot, pacing, and most of the characterization was very good.
The only major issue was Giles' voice. You had Giles speaking as a normal American male, when he's an upper-class British male. It kept throwing me out of the story.
Men of Giles' station don't refer to anything other than baby goats as 'kids.' Similarly, 'great,' in their parlance, is almost always used to refer to something large, rather than something very positive.
As I said, I enjoyed it, overall.
Review By [DeacBlue] • Date [25 Apr 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
As I have said before Xander is my favorite, but I also really like NCIS and M7-ATF stories so I was very excited to read this story. I really like the idea of Chris as Xander's father. Chris needed another son to love and Xander needed a real father.
Thanks for the good read!!!
Review By [AXanFan] • Date [27 Oct 09] • Not Rated
I'm so sad to see this end, it was such a wonderful story. I love the way you wove all the characters together. It's definitely a favorite of mine. Here's hoping the muses will inspire you to write more in this world. Or more in general as I enjoy your other stories as well. :)
Review By [vMures] • Date [12 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
This was wonderful. I've always liked the Magnificent Seven - this was a beautiful blend of the two shows. Thank you so much for sharing this - the flow was fantastic and the plot was great. I'd love to see you continue this - I do hope you shall. -MavenAlysse
Review By [MavenAlysse] • Date [3 Apr 09] • Not Rated