I'm kinda depressed after reading that. Impressed as well because it's very good. Lovely writing style, nice touches with "Volleyball" etc. but still.... depressed!
Comments from author:
wow, thank you JennyLal, i'm glad you liked it, though i'm sorry it depressed you, i hope it'll blow over soon. this is only my second story and i wrote it in about 10 minutes. i guess inspiration just struck. i didn't even know where the story was going when i started writing it, to be honest. thank you again for your kind review
Review By [JennyLal] • Date [27 Oct 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]