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Review of chapter "Revelation" from NPetrenko
Review:
Excellent story. More please!
Review By [NPetrenko] • Date [27 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Revelation" from ICE
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I remember reading this WIP a few years ago and really enjoying it. Is there any more of it or did the bunny run away?

FYI...it's every bit of good that i remember
Review By [ICE] • Date [11 Dec 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Revelation" from msdarque
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Interesting, fun.. hot kiss! ;)
I'd love to read more.. especially of Xander and Lex's growing relationship.
Congrats and kudos!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [25 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Revelation" from banner
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I woke up yesterday morning thinking about this story, and took a short forever tracking it down again. I reread it today. I'd forgotten how much I loved it. The characterizations are wonderfully deep and true. The plot threads simply flow naturally from the people involved. There's no sense of forced development - the pace is perfect. I love the descriptions as well. I can visualize every scene, but you don't get bogged down in detail.
I hope you come back to this story. It's a gem.
Review By [banner] • Date [25 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Revelation" from jgoodman
Review:
good story, please update
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [28 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Revelation" from QueenCobra
Review:
I love the background story the Scoobies have with Lex because of the Halloween thing, and the fact that Lex is pretty much in the dark about how much Xander probably understands and knows him. And the friendship that Lex, Xander, and Willow are forming is making me smile. Love it.

Oh, and the kiss! I hope there will be more Xander and Lex kissing. Because I also hope that there will be an update soon as well. This story is too good to let it go. Yeah? Stories can always get restarted, and I'm sure your other readers would rejoice to see what happens when Lex realizes he kissed Xander, and what Xander will do after his night of 'Lex Luthor kissed him'.

So yes, thoroughly enjoyed reading Folded in Your Heart and will be looking out for an update because I'm optimistic and I want to see what Xander will do with the strange that is Smallville as it's a little bit more strange than Sunnydale. :D
Review By [QueenCobra] • Date [20 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trip Down Memory Lane" from purrfus
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I started watching Smallville again, at least some of the time and it inspired me to come look for some old favorites. I hated what the writers did to the characters, even though I know there was no way they'd get more of a relationship past the censors.

Every time I read this chapter I wonder what it would have been like if Lex had memories of that night but had written it off to a drugged out haze. But having to learn everything about each other from scratch has it appeal too.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [16 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Revelation" from lothlorien
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well don't you just have the perfect timing... what on earth gave you the idea that that was a good place to stop writing a good story ^_^

hope you start writing again.
Review By [lothlorien] • Date [6 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Revelation" from valdemarherald
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This is a wonderful story, I hope that you get the inspiration to continue it. Lex and Xander are just so cute.
Review By [valdemarherald] • Date [25 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Revelation" from (Recent Donor)Saharra
Review:
I absolutely love this story. Please, will it be continued? You've done a marvelous job of combining the two universes and the way you write the characters is to die for! I don't mind waiting for an update. I'd simply like to know the chances of one popping up. ^_^
Review By [(Recent Donor)Saharra] • Date [20 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Revelation" from escagirluk
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You know, there's a little part in me that's currently whining "when are you going to update!!!" Because this is such a great story and I love the progression and everything (and kinda hope that it'll actually end up Lex/Xan/Clark), and it kinda sucks that it hasn't been updated in so long. But I can understand if it's because you have writer's block or something, it really sucks and is hard to get over.

Anyways, just wanted to say I think this story is awesome and I hope you update sometime in the future.
Review By [escagirluk] • Date [13 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Revelation" from Jhawksun
Review:
please update this story.
Review By [Jhawksun] • Date [7 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Revelation" from (Past Donor)fojee
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Will this ever be finished? Don't mean to add any pressure of whatnot, but seriously, this has to be one of the best Smallville/Buffy crossovers I've read. I adore the Lex/Xander interactions, I adore Xander drooling over the hot high schoolers, I adore Willow trying to get over her addiction. It rings so true. Please, please, please update! :)
Review By [(Past Donor)fojee] • Date [21 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Revelation" from Almadynis
Review:
More? Please?
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [27 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Revelation" from inarae
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Me likes. Very much. Regress-into-baby-talk-out-of-delight much.
I wouldn't have thought this crossover would work, especially with the set up, but it fits perfect. And I love the character voices.
Yes, perfect is the right word.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Review By [inarae] • Date [23 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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