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Review of chapter "That was the plan" from Zarohk
Review:
The oddly specific mutation of "the ooze" makes me think that it might in fact be another, stealthier, crossover. It's the energized protodermis from Bionicle, which in turn is part of the Energized Protodermis Entity, literally a sentient mutagen that can consciously decide to mutate beings in a specific way, or that is guided by destiny to mutate being in a particular way. Here it seems that the Energized Protodermis Entity got bored and decided to make DIY Toa out of random animals (in this case Splinter and the turtles). Cool subtle crossover.
Comments from author:
I am pretty much completely unfamiliar with Bionicle so that would be a no.
Review By [Zarohk] • Date [25 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Random Encounters" from POTENTIALlyAwesome
Review:
:) fun story!
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [POTENTIALlyAwesome] • Date [19 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Random Encounters" from Dragonelf
Review:
You have done a real good job on this story so far and I hope you will get inspired to add more chapters to this story.

::Gives the plot bunny some Chocolate Pie::

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The truth shall make you odd.
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Comments from author:
Thanks, but right now I am concentrating on finishing 'Aesir of Sunnydale'.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [9 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Enter the Shredder" from Numfar
Review:
I'm surprised with this being the only crossover between Turtles and the Buffy/Angel verse; what with the biped robots (Ted and RoboBuffy), the cyborg ninjas from Angel season 5 and the action takings place in the shadows, sewers and any place dark, dank and gritty, there are emotional charms to the people as well. I watched the recent TMNT which had Sarah Gellar as April and instantly saw the franchises being connectable.

I mostly like your stories aside from the outdated quips but was wondering; why in the world did you include Underworld? the only link was Angel season 5's Nina who's species originated from Europe (and Joss seemed to have use that as inspiration) but psuedovamps and lycans originated from two brothers who were infected with a virus that destroyed their village but gave them immortallity until one was bitten by a bat and another a wolf. then Donatelo showed a curiosity regarding the improbability of the ooz mutating creatures into biped sentient people. Is it possible that the ooz is linked to the virus somehow? and seeing how they're both similar I'm hoping, when you get to the lycans in NY that there would be some comedic reference to Rezar being let loose on the streets earlier.

anyway, if that's the case I'll be seeing Underworld Evolution in a new light with its giant mutant bat and ofcourse the lycans.

oh, and does Casey strike you as the werewolf type?
Comments from author:
This isn't actually the only crossover, but it is one of the few. I can't come up with names right now, but I know they do exist. I don't know what you mean exactly by the outdated quips so I can't defend that by saying it's set in 2003 and seeks to link the buffy-verse with a set of movies that were made in the early 90's.

The Underworld reference was something of a throw-away line because I wasn't going to bring that universe into the story. Just keep the door open for sequels. When I wrote that about the ooze, I honestly hadn't made the connection between the virus and the ooze, but it would make sense wouldn't it?

As for Casey, I think he's best when he has a baseball bat in his right hand and a hockey-stick in his left. Which is kinda hard with claws. Not to mention, how would he fit that mask over a snout?
Review By [Numfar] • Date [3 Apr 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Random Encounters" from banditobane
Review:
I've read the entire story and it brought me back to when I was a kid againe. I think you got all the Turtle characters right on and am glad to see you added Keno in this story as well. Hopefully you will continue this story soon I'd like to see what happenends.
Comments from author:
Thank you, glad to hear I managed to capture your attention. As for continuing this story, not any time soon but I will get back to writing on this one.
Review By [banditobane] • Date [24 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "That was the plan" from saberson
Review:
This is a pretty good fic so far. never seen an xover with TMNT before but you pull it off. good work
Comments from author:
Thank you. There are actually one or two other TMNT crossovers on this site, one of which features Faith as the main character. But I am always glad to hear my stories don't suck.
Review By [saberson] • Date [29 Apr 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trials and Turtlelations" from Lin
Review:
i'm eagerly awaiting an update.
Comments from author:
And I am working on one. But it isn't finished yet and I honestly never know when I will finish a chapter.
Review By [Lin] • Date [13 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trials and Turtlelations" from Belisarius
Review:
Whoops, got so far into discussing the correct way to slit a throat... (I scare myself sometimes) that I forgot to actually review the rest of the story.

Overall, it's pretty damn good so far. No problems with grammar and spelling that I noticed, and it's quite entertaining so far. This is only the second Buffy/TMNT crossover I've seen, and I like what I've seen so far.
Comments from author:
Hehe, it's always nice to have a hobby. Yea, not a lot of BtvS/TMNT crossovers around which part of the reason I wanted to write it. To boldly write what no-one has written before and all that.

Thanks for the review!
Review By [Belisarius] • Date [1 Mar 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We want you!" from Belisarius
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"But the rapid loss of blood as well as well as the lack of oxygen quickly drained him of his strength."

Cutting just the windpipe will not result in bleeding out, and also doesn't mean you can't breathe.

"Blood spattered on the newspaper as he struggled against the hands holding him down. His cries were being kept muffled by the hands over his mouth "

And he wouldn't be able to make a sound anyway, any cut to the windpipe would damage the larynx. Which is why doctor's cut in the little hollow where the clavicle meets at the base of your neck when they do a tracheotomy. If you want to kill someone with a cut to the neck, you cut from directly below the left ear, across the larynx, and to directly below the right ear. You'll sever all the major arteries and stop the annoying cries for help. Bleeding out will occur in about a minute, maybe less if his heart's really pumping. Death from lack of oxygen can take as much as 15 minutes! If you don't do it long enough, the body might start breathing on its own again.
Comments from author:
You are correct, I am vaguely embarrassed to make such a mistake. In my defense, I am not trying to be real accurate in this story. Still, should have caught that simple a mistake. I hope the rest of the story is more to your liking?
Review By [Belisarius] • Date [1 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trials and Turtlelations" from AngusH
Review:
Great!

The new characters are excellent and Faith is nicely portrayed.

I look forward to the next chapter.
Comments from author:
I look forward to it too, I wonder what will be in it. Can't wait to find out!
Review By [AngusH] • Date [1 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The game is afoot" from Lin
Review:
I hope you have not decided to abandon this fic because of lack of reviews!! I have not been checking TTH as regularly as i used to and i rememberd this story and went searching for it, it was pretty disappointing to see only three chapters. :: pouts::
(this isn't a guilt trip..i swear) :D :D
Pretty please give us a new chapter.
Comments from author:
I will do my best but I got another story that I should be working on too. RL can be a pain for your writing sometimes.
Review By [Lin] • Date [15 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We want you!" from SlowMercury
Review:
Can't wait to see who the third Slayer is! Alice and Frankie are pretty cool. I'm looking forward to the introduction of the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles and their attendant chaos.
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [4 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We want you!" from Lin
Review:
Woah, very cool!
Are the turtles going to make an appearance, or is shred man just gonna be around..either way...i'm enjoying this.
Faith is one of my favorite characters and i'm glad that you are using her, you are doing a great job with your original characters (atleast i'm pretty sure they are originals..i have not seen the last few seasons and all that i know about them is from lots and lots of fanfic)
Please keep writing.
Oh..and give that poor watcher some books...ten years and no funding..terrible!
Comments from author:
Shredder is still obsessed with killing the Turtles so they will most certainly make an appearance and yes, Vishe/Alice/Frankie are original. Although I have based Vishe's appearance on another quirky character from another TV-show.
New books are on the way.
Review By [Lin] • Date [4 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Enter the Shredder" from MartinSeventy
Review:
Hi Janusi.

Gotta say this is a cool fic. I give it an 9 out of 10. =D
Comments from author:
thanks, for a while there I was afraid nobody liked the story. :(
Review By [MartinSeventy] • Date [1 Nov 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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