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Review of chapter "Ollivander" from Cmiller
Review:
*poke* will you have more anytime soon?
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [21 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ollivander" from IllusionsofBliss
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I still absolutely love this story, and I don't say that very often at all. Really hoping that you can post another chapter sometime in the future, it's killing me to not see what happens next!
Review By [IllusionsofBliss] • Date [2 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ollivander" from eset
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This story is amazing. I've read several Harry Peggy Sues, but this is the first I've seen with Ron, and you've done a great job. I hope you're continuing it (from the update dates it seems that you are).

I can't wait to see Harry and Hermione's reactions when they get the full story, of Fred and George's when they hear about Olivander and put two and two together. Will Draco take Faith's advice to heart? What's the last horcrux? And what's happening with the slayer deaths--why are they happening differently?

I can't wait to read more.

-eset
Review By [eset] • Date [8 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ollivander" from BritneyandJacob
Review:
Excellent chapters 1-18. I love them. Please continue. I look forward to more soon.
Review By [BritneyandJacob] • Date [7 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ollivander" from Wavelet
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Wow. This story is really amazing. I'm continually impressed with your characterizations of both the Buffy and Harry Potter characters. In particular, in many time travel stories, the time travelers take center stage, while everyone else just sort of fades into the background, but you have done an excellent job of making the characters besides Ron and Faith vivid and important.

The latest plot with Ollivander doesn't exactly catch my interest, although I can see how it ties into Voldemort building a demon army and appreciate how it is helping Harry and Hermione adapt to the future Ron and his changes, as well as his new allies like Faith and Willow. However, what I am really looking forward to is next year. After all, as soon as Dumbledore was cursed by the ring, he had about a year to live, so, at some point, Ron's going to realize that saving the old man will not be possible. Moreover, Dawn remembering pieces of the future could slowly start to derail Ron and Faith's plan unless they realize what she knows, as, presumably, she'll be acting to alter the future as well. There's also the Faith's visions of Buffy. I'm not quite sure what to make of those, but I look forward to seeing where they go.
Review By [Wavelet] • Date [2 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ollivander" from nomorebread
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Wow, wow, wow. This just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait to see what happens. Keep up the awesomeness!
Review By [nomorebread] • Date [17 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Beginning of Summer Part II" from IllusionsofBliss
Review:
Hello again, you may have noticed I'd just reviewed on ff.net but couldn't resist leaving one here too. Not to mention, giving you a rec :)
Thought I'd mention it since no one else seems to, but wondering about Dawn's dreams in this chapter - who's the mystery-man? and if they are from the future, how come she's having them and how? Can't wait to eventually find out :)

Edit - once I figure out how to make a rec, it's quite late and my brain isn't functioning, so i'll look again in the morning, lol
Review By [IllusionsofBliss] • Date [15 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ollivander" from RedIAm
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Great story. I stayed up way too late last night reading it. ;)
Review By [RedIAm] • Date [14 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ollivander" from ChaosLady
Review:
Wow. You haven't updated in so long that I about gave up. But here you are! With an action-packed chapter! I want more! Update soon!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. This chapter ended up being rewritten quite a few times and I am not anticipating the next one to have the same problems. Thanks for the review!
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [13 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ollivander" from Meneldur
Review:
I assume you do know the name is Audrey, not Aubrey? It's just you didn't change the rest of the names.
"the shear amount of energy"- sheer, not shear.
“Aubrey has been conspicuously watching the place all day," - conspicuously would mean it was obvious she was watching it. Maybe 'subtly' or 'quietly'?
"While it wasn’t as durable and certainly not as practically" - practical not practically.
"Ollivander was not insight" - in sight.
"set a blinding flash of white light into the room" - sent.
"He sent a second blast off energy" - of energy.
"Ron only had time to conger a barely formed" - conjure a barely formed.
Comments from author:
Wow - thank you so much for those. They have been fixed.
Review By [Meneldur] • Date [13 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ollivander" from Cutiepie
Review:
Great chapter, although it could use some proof-reading. You skip a word or two here and there. Also, I believe you meant Audrey Hepburn, not Aubrey. I'd offer to beta read for you (since I really like your writing), but I am stretched too thin for time at the moment.

I hope that I remember the new name for the story when you update again, since I would hate to miss out on reading it as soon as possible. Would you care to elaborate on why you are changing it? I quite like "Mein Teil" (there is never a chance that I won't remember what story it is), but you certainly must have a reason for wanting a different name. I think that "Beacon" (that is the new name, right?) sounds a lot more generic, and I fear that I won't recognize it when the update notification comes to my email.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [13 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ollivander" from FireWolfe
Review:
Great chapter glad to see an update.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [13 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Matter of Trust" from Lisagirl
Review:
please update soon pretty pretty please
Review By [Lisagirl] • Date [17 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Matter of Trust" from Cmiller
Review:
was great. Hope for more soon.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [14 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Matter of Trust" from AnnOfMidnight
Review:
Great! One of my all time faves. Brava!
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [3 Aug 11] • Not Rated
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