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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)Kiwikatipo
Review:
I would have liked more to this story, as another reviewer said it was more like a prologue than a complete story. It is an interesting idea a Lilah/Luther pairing, you should develop it.
Comments from author:
Thank you, but I'm pretty sure I'm not going to continue on w/ it. If you want to continue on w/ this idea, then go ahead. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [(Moderator)Kiwikatipo] • Date [18 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)LisaF
Review:
And...? This reads like a prologue, so I'm very surprised to see it marked complete. Where's the plot?

Also, you should know that it's spelled "Los Angeles".
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! This was meant to be like a triple drabble, or something. I've been thinking about doing a "sequel" to this, but I'm not sure if I will or not, yet. As for Los Angeles, I thought it looked wrong, but Word didn't say it was spelled wrong, so I left it. Thanks for telling me about it (I'll go back and change it).
Review By [(Moderator)LisaF] • Date [1 Nov 06] • Not Rated
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