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Review of chapter "U.S.S. Enterprise (No Bloody A, B, C, or D)" from deathgeonous
Review:
Fun stuff. I love Illyria, and this was, again, fun stuff. Thanks for writing this, bye for now. And yes, I too think that most of these could be expainded but... they're just fine as one shots.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [24 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "USS Voyager" from FairyQilan
Review:
Seven and Illyria. If that isn't a great mental pic, nothing is.
Comments from author:
*pictures Amy Acker in shiny silver* I'll be in my bunk.
Review By [FairyQilan] • Date [2 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "USS Voyager" from (Current Donor)MaxGSandeman
Review:
Seven and Illyria are an interesting match. They would appreciate their differences and similarities.
It was fun too.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [(Current Donor)MaxGSandeman] • Date [2 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "U.S.S. Enterprise (No Bloody A, B, C, or D)" from Valkyrie
Review:
Man, if it took her a hundred years to get promoted to Lieutenant, that's a really slow learning curve.
Comments from author:
The MACOs and pre-Federation Earth's Starfleet were two separate organizations. Illyria went from being a member of what was essentially the marine corps, through a few other careers since she's immortal and not really going anywhere, and then joined the UFP Starfleet as a cadet, went through the Academy, reached the rank of lieutenant, and then went back to teach at the Academy. She just didn't acquire any further promotions because being a lectern jockey wasn't anything really noteworthy in Command's eyes. Now that she's back out in the field, she'd logically begin working her way upward again... or maybe not. She's one of Spock's subordinate divisional heads; not really a position where she can do stuff that gets her attention.
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [31 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "U.S.S. Enterprise (No Bloody A, B, C, or D)" from EbonySilvers
Review:
Interesting beginning...Hopefully it will give people ideas.
Comments from author:
I second that.
Review By [EbonySilvers] • Date [31 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Coruscant" from JediKnight
Review:
Interesting job, any idea what the next one will be?
Comments from author:
Star Trek 2009
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [31 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coruscant" from Grindhall
Review:
Love this little things any of them could be a great fic.

Thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
When I finish it, I'll probably put this up for scavenging if anyone wants to write an idea.
Review By [Grindhall] • Date [30 May 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coruscant" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
Interesting bit of work you have here, to say the least.

True, your treatment of characters like Tom or Peter might be a bit... excessive..., but some of your pairing ideas are definitely interesting; I'm particularly intrigued by the possibilities of Illyria/Madison, with the references to Illyria potentially having a 'Zord' form (Any chance you could expand that idea into its own story at some point?)
Comments from author:
I kinda found Tom and Harry to be Simpsons-esque characters for most of the series. It's like Bart and Lisa, the prankster and the brainiac. Yes, Tom is a shallow Casanova. Harry's a naive little boy compared to everyone. We get it. It got old fast.

As for Madison, I was pondering it. I need to find the DVD I have with the episodes on it.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [30 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Coruscant" from (Current Donor)Sithspit
Review:
Neat, a win/Win situation...
Comments from author:
Oooooh! Bad pun!
Review By [(Current Donor)Sithspit] • Date [30 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cybertron (Sorta)" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Hmm, I think Wise just said, in a well constructed way, with a nice rhyming scheme:
For though I may cry for awhile, my heart confused, something about you makes my thoughts abound with bliss and joy. It's with due respect and love tinged with regret that I say: "Though you won't dally with me, Illyria, I am content just loving you."


Anyway, good stories :D
Comments from author:
O_o

You scare me. But thanks for the review anyway. :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [16 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cybertron (Sorta)" from Wise
Review:
For thogh I wepe of teres ful a tyne,
Yet may that wo myn herte nat confounde;
Your semy voys that ye so smal out twyne
Maketh my thoght in joy and blis habounde.
So curtaysly I go with love bounde
That to myself I sey in my penaunce,
"Suffyseth me to love you, Illyria,
Thogh ye to me ne do no daliaunce."
Comments from author:
Do what? O_o
Review By [Wise] • Date [13 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cybertron (Sorta)" from CPTSkip
Review:
Lol! First, let me say that your Tom and Peter must be a couple of the biggest wimps in the multiverse. But you are just strange. But funny as Hell. The last three stories made me laugh out loud many times. Thanks for the laughs and the very ... interesting stories.
Comments from author:
*takes a bow* You're welcome.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [13 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cybertron (Sorta)" from Jess
Review:
Weird
Comments from author:
Duhh. :)
Review By [Jess] • Date [13 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cybertron (Sorta)" from physicsteach
Review:
These are all really good, but I think you've reached the point where "bluenette" is a more obnoxious than amusing.

And I love Optimus's line of thinking.
Comments from author:
Honestly, it's easier than any other phrase. When identifying from a third person perspective, if the character was using the person's hair color... they'd notice something like the blue stripes. "Blue-striped brunette" might be less obnoxious in theory, but how long would it be before THAT is more obnoxious than amusing and bluenette seems like a better alternative? O_o
Review By [physicsteach] • Date [12 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ultimate NYC" from (Current Donor)vinniebatman
Review:
Poor Peter, the violent hotness was too much for him!
I love this series!
Comments from author:
Poor Peter. ^_^
Review By [(Current Donor)vinniebatman] • Date [19 Apr 07] • Not Rated
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