Review of chapter "U.S.S. Enterprise (No Bloody A, B, C, or D)" from deathgeonous
Review:
Fun stuff. I love Illyria, and this was, again, fun stuff. Thanks for writing this, bye for now. And yes, I too think that most of these could be expainded but... they're just fine as one shots.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [24 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Seven and Illyria are an interesting match. They would appreciate their differences and similarities. It was fun too.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [MaxGSandeman] • Date [2 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "U.S.S. Enterprise (No Bloody A, B, C, or D)" from Valkyrie
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Man, if it took her a hundred years to get promoted to Lieutenant, that's a really slow learning curve.
Comments from author:
The MACOs and pre-Federation Earth's Starfleet were two separate organizations. Illyria went from being a member of what was essentially the marine corps, through a few other careers since she's immortal and not really going anywhere, and then joined the UFP Starfleet as a cadet, went through the Academy, reached the rank of lieutenant, and then went back to teach at the Academy. She just didn't acquire any further promotions because being a lectern jockey wasn't anything really noteworthy in Command's eyes. Now that she's back out in the field, she'd logically begin working her way upward again... or maybe not. She's one of Spock's subordinate divisional heads; not really a position where she can do stuff that gets her attention.
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [31 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "U.S.S. Enterprise (No Bloody A, B, C, or D)" from EbonySilvers
Review:
Interesting beginning...Hopefully it will give people ideas.
Comments from author:
I second that.
Review By [EbonySilvers] • Date [31 May 09] • Not Rated
Interesting bit of work you have here, to say the least.
True, your treatment of characters like Tom or Peter might be a bit... excessive..., but some of your pairing ideas are definitely interesting; I'm particularly intrigued by the possibilities of Illyria/Madison, with the references to Illyria potentially having a 'Zord' form (Any chance you could expand that idea into its own story at some point?)
Comments from author:
I kinda found Tom and Harry to be Simpsons-esque characters for most of the series. It's like Bart and Lisa, the prankster and the brainiac. Yes, Tom is a shallow Casanova. Harry's a naive little boy compared to everyone. We get it. It got old fast.
As for Madison, I was pondering it. I need to find the DVD I have with the episodes on it.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [30 May 09] • Not Rated
Review By [Sithspit] • Date [30 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cybertron (Sorta)" from Shieldage
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Hmm, I think Wise just said, in a well constructed way, with a nice rhyming scheme: For though I may cry for awhile, my heart confused, something about you makes my thoughts abound with bliss and joy. It's with due respect and love tinged with regret that I say: "Though you won't dally with me, Illyria, I am content just loving you."
Anyway, good stories :D
Comments from author:
O_o
You scare me. But thanks for the review anyway. :)
Review By [Shieldage] • Date [16 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
For thogh I wepe of teres ful a tyne, Yet may that wo myn herte nat confounde; Your semy voys that ye so smal out twyne Maketh my thoght in joy and blis habounde. So curtaysly I go with love bounde That to myself I sey in my penaunce, "Suffyseth me to love you, Illyria, Thogh ye to me ne do no daliaunce."
Comments from author:
Do what? O_o
Review By [Wise] • Date [13 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cybertron (Sorta)" from CPTSkip
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Lol! First, let me say that your Tom and Peter must be a couple of the biggest wimps in the multiverse. But you are just strange. But funny as Hell. The last three stories made me laugh out loud many times. Thanks for the laughs and the very ... interesting stories.
Comments from author:
*takes a bow* You're welcome.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [13 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review By [Jess] • Date [13 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cybertron (Sorta)" from physicsteach
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These are all really good, but I think you've reached the point where "bluenette" is a more obnoxious than amusing.
And I love Optimus's line of thinking.
Comments from author:
Honestly, it's easier than any other phrase. When identifying from a third person perspective, if the character was using the person's hair color... they'd notice something like the blue stripes. "Blue-striped brunette" might be less obnoxious in theory, but how long would it be before THAT is more obnoxious than amusing and bluenette seems like a better alternative? O_o
Review By [physicsteach] • Date [12 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ultimate NYC" from vinniebatman
Review:
Poor Peter, the violent hotness was too much for him! I love this series!
Comments from author:
Poor Peter. ^_^
Review By [vinniebatman] • Date [19 Apr 07] • Not Rated