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Review of chapter "That's No Moon... It's One Helluva Headache!!" from LFW
Review:
Great read
i do hope that there can be more, i am interested in what R2 did in the ImperalNet
Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [15 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "That's No Moon... It's One Helluva Headache!!" from eriktheviking
Review:
A fun addition to one of the all time great movies.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [27 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "That's No Moon... It's One Helluva Headache!!" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written and entertaining Xander in Star Wars.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [29 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "That's No Moon... It's One Helluva Headache!!" from oldgirllost
Review:
Since you have a history of long periods between chapters I am not in despair -- yet.

Soon though.

Great story.
Review By [oldgirllost] • Date [6 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "That's No Moon... It's One Helluva Headache!!" from Netchka
Review:
Wow, major cool story. Are more chapters coming any time soon? I want to read about Ben teaching both Luke and Xander all he knows.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [3 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "That's No Moon... It's One Helluva Headache!!" from XinnLagjin
Review:
I love this story! Will you be changing POV in the next chapters, and is Xander going to spill his guts? I love how you had Xander do that move from the movie that I can't remember the name of. In a way Xander has become a bit of a guardian angel.
Review By [XinnLagjin] • Date [13 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "That's No Moon... It's One Helluva Headache!!" from RyenSelenityCaliburn
Review:
This is awesome.. hope you write more.. :)
Ryen
Review By [RyenSelenityCaliburn] • Date [11 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "That's No Moon... It's One Helluva Headache!!" from SonofthePearl
Review:
Continue with this story please. Hilarious romp
Review By [SonofthePearl] • Date [4 Mar 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "That's No Moon... It's One Helluva Headache!!" from djhardim
Review:
Very good. If I were to guess, I would say that Xander would be considered a low level Force sensitive. While certainly noteworthy, probably not enough for Xander to be considered a candidate for Jedi training.

Looking forward to more.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "That's No Moon... It's One Helluva Headache!!" from Robby
Review:
Cool idea! Don't think anyones done something like this before.
Review By [Robby] • Date [17 Nov 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "That's No Moon... It's One Helluva Headache!!" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Divergence!

Yes, but all that's holy, yes!!!
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [16 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "That's No Moon... It's One Helluva Headache!!" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
nice to read more of this and someone should give Chew Toy a copy of that chapter *g*
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [22 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "That's No Moon... It's One Helluva Headache!!" from Bill
Review:
Very well done!
Review By [Bill] • Date [20 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "That's No Moon... It's One Helluva Headache!!" from Nonlinear
Review:
Nice. If it has to follow the Star Wars plotline so closely, at least you have the guts to deviate at a critical moment (Ben) and the character personality to make the slightly different POV interesting (Chew-Toy, ha!).

I like the journal format well enough, but it sort of gives away the fact that Xander doesn't die or get separated from his trusty journal. It might help the tension in the story if you traded off between journal entries (more personable, funny, full of correct SW terminology) and in-the-moment scenes (action, danger, misunderstandings abounding).

Anyway, interesting piece.
Review By [Nonlinear] • Date [20 Sep 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "That's No Moon... It's One Helluva Headache!!" from (Past Donor)Keldin
Review:
Glad to see this one back! Star Wars isn't one of my top favorite genres, but I do recall enjoying this fic, and it's good to see another chapter. Hopefully more soon!
Review By [(Past Donor)Keldin] • Date [19 Sep 09] • Not Rated
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