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Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from Vickzie
Wicked cool story
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [21 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from LycGoodwine
I loved this, I did. I think I've read this before when it was first being posted and then I lost it, but I'm quite glad I found it again.
Review By [LycGoodwine] • Date [8 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from LeaFairy
Wow, this is an absolutely incredible story! I really love the idea of Dawn as Aragorn and Arwen's daughter... It's really brilliant and completely original.

I also love the background history with Dawn living with Angel and the gang since Buffy's death and also the change with Connor and Dawn being the one who found him and her stopping him from drowning Angel in the ocean is all full awesomeness too :)

The appearances of Elrond and the twins was also surprising but great twist. I love how Dawn and her grandfather are connected by their similar gifts and because of that they were able to rescue her. I also adore Lindsay in this and I'm excited that he may be coming with Dawn to Middle Earth :)

I'm equal parts sad and happy about Dawn going back to Middle Earth though... I hate for her to leave Angel, Connor and the rest of the gang. *sighs* Their interactions are so wonderful, they really are a family in all but blood, but I do think it's right for her to go back to her real home with her father. *sniffles* Poor Angel, he's going to be so devastated! *hugs him*

Anyways, this has been a fabulously written story that I've very much enjoyed reading! And I definitely can't wait to read more! Thanks so much for writing!!
Comments from author:
Aww. I'm glad you enjoy it so much! You seem emotionally invested in it, and that makes me happy. Yup. It was hard for me to decide whether Dawn would stay or go. But I figured it was time to carve her own path. Thanks for reading! More to come, I promise. I've already started.
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [11 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from Nosi
Really wonderful to see an update, but sad to know this story is going to end soon. This chapter was well-written with the conversation between Aragorn and Dawn particularly well done. I've noticed that your writing on this story improved with every chapter, so congratulations on that.

Congrats also on your marriage. Hope to see the final chapter soon.
Comments from author:
Ha, thanks. Considering I started this back when I was sixteen, I'm glad it has gotten better. :D Improving writing is kind of the point of me posting. I will be attempting to write Dawn's adventures in Middle-earth after this story as a continuation... but after seven years, I'm just trying to finish the story up :). Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you've enjoyed it.
Review By [Nosi] • Date [5 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from MarcusSLazarus
Simple, but intriguing (Even if I was a bit confused at what Dawn was doing at the Hyperion at the start, I enjoyed the dynamics you created as the story progressed), I have to admit.

Not only do you use the time-difference between realities very well, but the connection between the Key and the One Ring is definitely interesting, and you’ve definitely sown the seeds for some VERY interesting plot potential in future chapters...

Keep up the good work!
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [5 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from KatieKat
I can' wait to read more of this story. I've been trying to read it for a couple of years now and I finally got to the end of what you have so far.
Review By [KatieKat] • Date [20 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from (Past Donor)oldshoe
I'm glad to see the continuation. I went back and reread the whole thing.
Review By [(Past Donor)oldshoe] • Date [19 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from (Past Donor)TraceyC
Congratulations on all of the good changes (I hope) that have happened to you - you deserve it... and this story (and chapter) was worth waiting any length of time on for an update... speaking as someone who's had writer's block due to things changing a LOT in my own last couple of years... I am glad to see your new chapter, and understand about RL just taking over!
Review By [(Past Donor)TraceyC] • Date [15 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from Melli
I LOVED this chapter; the interaction between the characters was fantastic. You perfectly wrote the conflict between Dawn’s loyalty to the Fang Gang and her family that she just found, and the parting lines regarding Elrond made me giggle. I am very excited to read the next/last chapter. :)

On a personal note, I still remember all of those years ago when this story was in the absent meanderings stage being contemplated over IMs along with Elrond’s eyebrows and the twins from the Matrix; I can’t believe it is really almost over!
Comments from author:

Melli! I really miss our little group. I can't believe we've been kind of hanging around each other for seven years or better! You, me, Jamee, Stacey. Wow. I'm like... grown up and married. I was mid-teen when I started writing these! My husband is awesome in the sense that he encourages me to updated and write.
Review By [Melli] • Date [14 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from (Current Donor)vladt
almost did not read this, due to the starting date and number of chapters. am so very glad i did. fine tale. thank you for the very good read.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [14 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from FaithWinchester
Ack! Don't stop there! Please, please, more soon!
Review By [FaithWinchester] • Date [13 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from Bluejello
Lovely to have you back! Great update, nice to see Dawn making attempts with her family.
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [13 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from (Past Donor)morgyair
I loved the update and am now motivated to go back and read the previous parts! I am also pleased that there will be a second part, by the way congratulations on the getting married and just look at moving as a way to weed out all the stuff that if you have not used it in a year your most likely not going to use donate it!
Comments from author:
Yup. Every time I move, I play the game of "Do I Want to take this with Me." Thanks for reading!
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [13 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from Malyce
It's a shame that this story hasn't been updated, or maybe real life just got in the way. It's very well written and believable.
Review By [Malyce] • Date [3 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from TouchoftheWind
This story is amazing, I admit I was wanting DawnConnor...but this works out well too... I can't help but want Dawn to stay...or at least Angel and Connor go with her...

After reading the growing friendship between Connor and Legolas I can't help but want them to learn about the Destroyer or at least have Connor beat Legolas in sparring using his full skills... maybe have Legolas comfort Connor- any chance of some LegolasConnor? Lol!

Update soon!
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [3 Sep 09] • Not Rated
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