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Tabula Avatar Book 2

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Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from Macfeste
Review:
I'm on a re-read of your series, and I just noticed an inconsistency in this chapter, since you've later established that "Okay" is not a common word in the realms.

Imoen pouted. “Okay,” she said. “I’ll make do with scrolls. And the Monster Summoning wand the vampire wizard dropped.”

Or am I thinking too hard about it? (I'm not trying to be a jerkass pedant, I swear! love your work!)
Comments from author:
Thanks! It was just a slip by me; I've corrected it so that she now says 'Very well.'
Review By [Macfeste] • Date [26 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Zarohk
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“In all the sci-fi books it’s things like, well, gunpowder that the space travelers bring to the primitive planets. We’re more into the clothing and entertainment side. The bra, fancy hats, rock and roll, and now the six-string guitar.”
I love this because it directly connects to the Discworld reference before. Yet another fantasy world with Rock and Roll. Hopefully Giles' music doesn't come alive like that.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Zarohk] • Date [25 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from MageMan
Review:
I know this is a really old story and all, but could you give some detail about the cryptic remark by Spike about the invading army having elephants then they should have a hot dog stand and why it's funny?

even after all this time it's still a good story. I'm on my second read of the series.
Comments from author:
It's a reference to Terry Pratchett's 'Moving Pictures', in which the hot-dog salesman C.M.O.T. Dibbler becomes a movie mogul and is obsessed with making an epic film which must feature a thousand elephants.
Review By [MageMan] • Date [20 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-eight" from extell
Review:
Just finished reading your 2 tabula avatar stories.
Loved both of them.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much!
Review By [extell] • Date [8 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-eight" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
I too must claim you are evil. Though Debt of Blood is good, very good, even a few chapters in, I want know how Tabula Avatar ends dammit!

I feel for Sorkatani and Buffy, neither of them seems to be able to catch a break on the front of love.

Thanks very much.
Comments from author:
"I want know how Tabula Avatar ends dammit!"

Rocks fall, everybody dies. No, wait, that's 'Neverwinter Nights 2'. Buffy and Dawn are definitely still alive as of the spring of 1375 DR (it's autumn 1369 DR in the most recent chapter of TA). For news of everyone else, you'll just have to wait - but I'm busy writing the next chapter now and I'm making good progress.
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [24 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-eight" from (Current Donor)Sulien
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Gyah! You are COMPLETELY evil! And I see that the continuation only has six chapters. *whimper* Well, I've read through up to this point in three days, so I guess I'll just have to bite the bullet and read section three as a WIP, despite my severe allergy to those things. :-p

Thank you for this series, I'm enjoying the living daylights out of it!

ETA: Ah, I see! Cool! I get to go and read the SG-1 bits of this story and THEN start in on section 3 of Tabula Avater. That'll work! I'll just have to remind myself to parcel it out as a treat now and then rather than sitting for hours at a time and devouring it (bad habit of mine with truly good stories, be they fanfic or published books). ;)
Comments from author:
Thank you!

I wrote 'Debt of Blood' avoiding 'Tabula Avatar' spoilers as much as possible. However a couple of things that crop up in it will make more sense if 'The Whole of the Moon' and 'Dangerous Moonlight' are read first.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [17 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-six" from Prometeus
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It's not difficult to find copies of Market Square Heroes on Youtube, but it is difficult to find a good one. Here's the best on youtube,

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gMs6F37154U&;p=37C543FFA5126C36&playnext=1&index=6

and here's both the Battle Priest version and the Alternative version from which you pulled the extended lyrics
http://listen.grooveshark.com/#/search/songs/?query=market square marillion alternative
Review By [Prometeus] • Date [6 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-eight" from Prometeus
Review:
The mention of Roundworld reminded me of Project Hellmouth by Arjen. I think you'd appreciate it. Have you read it?
Review By [Prometeus] • Date [5 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LetsRandom
Review:
I really enjoyed your story, unfortunately it seems you have abandoned Part 3... I'm not sure if I want to continue now. Thanks for the most enjoyable read.
Comments from author:
Thank you. No, I definitely haven't abandoned Part 3. I took a year out to write 'Debt of Blood' quite deliberately; the Buffy crowd are just about to meet one of DoB's central characters and I decided that writing them in this order would be the best way of ensuring compatibility between the character in the two stories. Now DoB is out of the way I'm returning to 'Tabula Avatar' and 'A Plague of Serpents' - APoS got priority, at first, because I'd already written the end of Chapter 6 a year ago and I wanted to bring the story up to that piece. Now I've done that I'm returning to 'Tabula Avatar' right away.
Review By [LetsRandom] • Date [7 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-eight" from Morgomir
Review:
Fantastic second part. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [28 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ramenth
Review:
Just incase you weren't aware, Grey DeLise, the Voice Actor for Viconia, actually does sing, which I seem to recall your version of her doing. Quite well, no less. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4kXXTe6M1PE
Comments from author:
I had know that Grey DeLisle sang, and that was part of the inspiration behind Viconia's growing rock star status, but I'd never actually heard her before. Thank you for the link - although I didn't like the 'Bohemian Rhapsody' cover itself it led me to her version of Springsteen's 'I'm On Fire', which is much better.
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [23 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-eight" from Ansku
Review:
I'd kind of want to play this version of the game myself :)
Comments from author:
Except that the 'players' no longer have any control and the characters are making all the decisions. That rather makes the player superfluous.
Review By [Ansku] • Date [22 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-eight" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Bloody Hell!!! EXACTLY what I was afraid of happening a few chapters ago has come to pass. My #1 best rated series here continues to amaze - don't keep us waiting long! :-)
Comments from author:
Thank you! I will be taking a little break to work on other fics, I'm afraid, but I'll pick this up again in about two weeks.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-eight" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Oh bloody hell... what and ending. Really like the personalities you have develop for Bodhi and friends.

Wispr
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-eight" from Dragonelf
Review:
Oh dear, it looks like they run into a serious case of Murphy's Law. Something tells me that it might be apocalypse season as well.

::Gives the plot bunny a carrot omelette while looking cautiously at the cliffhanger::

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Grown men may learn from very little children,
for the hearts of little children are pure, and,
therefore, the Great Spirit may show to them
many things which older people miss.
- Nicholas Black Elk [Hehaka Sapa]
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Comments from author:
Yes; it's May, Sunnydale-time, and the regularly scheduled Apocalypse is here - and she's brought friends.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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