Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
using
 paypal
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Is your email address still valid?

Finishing What He Started

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Dianasis
Review:
ok, so I don't like your story, but I have to admire your talented writing.

Hm - dark, but genius - sounds like Poe.

I shall have to keep an eye out for you.
Review By [(Past Donor)Dianasis] • Date [20 Aug 09] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from HeatherDee
Review:
Hm, I don't know if I really see Jack doing this. He survived Charlie's death after all. He's had years more experience to draw from by this time and he knows that death comes in war. That said he is still human and we all have limits so it still works for me.
Review By [HeatherDee] • Date [14 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)romero
Review:
How heartbreaking. Jack lost all his friends, loves and hope. Thank you for a well written piece.
Review By [(Current Donor)romero] • Date [10 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from spk
Review:
Very poignant & heart-wrenching. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [10 Nov 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JennMarie
Review:
Dang, when you say it's a Shakespearean body count, you ain't kidding! Beautifully poignant piece. I *sniffed*. Poor brave Jack.
Review By [JennMarie] • Date [10 Nov 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
I love your writing and have enjoyed every story of your's that I've read. Except this one. Sorry. It's well written, but just too damn depressing. *goes off in a blue funk*
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [9 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)kribby
Review:
nah, he would have went back to Edora-- or off to SGA... more folks to fight-- nasty story though-- ucky flies.... not my cup o' tea.
Review By [(Recent Donor)kribby] • Date [9 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
Review:
You warned me, and it was hard to take, but I can definitely see O'Neill choosing that course of action, under those circumstances (however AU they are, since Jacob died with Selmac in the primary universe of SG1, about the same time Pete and Sam broke up and O'Neill left the SGC). However, with none of his "family" left and the war against the Goa'ulds won (and no Ori to complicate things), I don't see Jack O'Neill sticking around much longer. Sad, but well-done.
Comments from author:
This was written before the end of season 8 and I *hate* the way they offed poor Jacob/Selmak. They deserved better.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [9 Nov 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking