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Review of chapter "As You Should Have Been" from Letomo

Review:

Very nice. In fact, excellently done!

Comments from author:

Thank you!

Review By [Letomo] • Date [27 Mar 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "As You Should Have Been" from (Past Donor)

Ponder

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You do a great job of pointing a glaring light at BtVS inconsistencies, and making us laugh at the same time. Kudos. :)

*** Ponder

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Ponder] • Date [31 Mar 10] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "As You Should Have Been" from JEHayes

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So how canon should have gone. I mean, one of Willow's finest moments in canon was without a doubt going after Xander with an ax. Killing Riley with a shovel? Even better. Plus, what good is a disclaimer, no matter how non-vague, if there's no follow through?

Comments from author:

Exactly.

Thank you!

Review By [JEHayes] • Date [31 Jan 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "As You Should Have Been" from Ches

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The shovel beating stories never get old

Comments from author:

Thank you!

Review By [Ches] • Date [7 Oct 07] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "As You Should Have Been" from UnlikelyStory

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I made the mistake of continuing to eat my soup while I read this (the label of Dark Comedy, along with my perverse sense of humor, should have been enough to make me set it aside). Anyways, I just wanted to let you know that I'm not blaming you personally for either the minestrone-flavored sticky residue on my keyboard or the burning sensation it caused while traveling through my nostrils to get there.

P.S. - Good job.

Comments from author:

Thank you! Sorry about the soup and keyboard incident - it's usually coffee or coke that my drabbles bring into contact with keyboards.

Review By [UnlikelyStory] • Date [25 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "As You Should Have Been" from magik

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I can't stop laughing! Ha! Ha! This was great! Thank you!

Comments from author:

Thank you!

Review By [magik] • Date [10 Nov 06] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "As You Should Have Been" from Geyer

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Brilliant! I like Riley, but this was lovely.

Comments from author:

Thank you!

Review By [Geyer] • Date [10 Nov 06] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "As You Should Have Been" from Vld

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*Chuckles evilly* Huhuhu... oh yes! Oh I really liked that a lot! Thank you so much! Death by shovelling REALLY is the adequate death for Riley!
And real glad that you took my comment litterally lol! I LOVE it!

Comments from author:

Thank you!

Review By [Vld] • Date [10 Nov 06] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "As You Should Have Been" from CPTSkip

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Lol! Very sick, but funny!

Comments from author:

Thank you!

Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [10 Nov 06] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "As You Should Have Been" from MBB

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Oooh-kay...this is comedy? Isn't there a separate genre for bashing? (not dissing the genre, just like a fair warning)

Comments from author:

The possible genres are 'Action, Comedy, Dark, Drama, Fanart, General, Mystery, Romance'. It doesn't fit any of the other genres; I would have classed it as 'Dark Comedy' but that isn't an option. I did put a character death warning in the summary. I don't think that it really counts as 'character bashing' except in the most literal sense of the word.

ETA: I have now inserted 'dark comedy' into the summary.

Review By [MBB] • Date [10 Nov 06] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "As You Should Have Been" from (Current Donor)

DaveTurner

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Oh that promise!

Very funny, very good.

All the best,
DaveT.

Comments from author:

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Review By [ (Current Donor)

DaveTurner] • Date [10 Nov 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]

Review of chapter "As You Should Have Been" from (Moderator)

Demona

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*snicker* Now that is how it should happened! Except that Riley really grew on me when he came back in Season 6, married, and with that scar on his face. *swoon* But this was just great. I'm glad to see that the threat was truly followed through.

Comments from author:

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Review By [ (Moderator)

Demona] • Date [10 Nov 06] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "As You Should Have Been" from nimthecat

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oookaaay....
nice to see the threat in action for once.

Comments from author:

I do believe that people should keep their promises.

Review By [nimthecat] • Date [10 Nov 06] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "As You Should Have Been" from arkeus

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Snort, this is GOOD.
Great job.

Comments from author:

Thank you!

Review By [arkeus] • Date [10 Nov 06] • Not Rated