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Thunder over Smallville: Book One

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Review of chapter "Chapter 44 – Losing Battles" from DieselDriver
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"I, uh, accidentally married Athena"

Xander doesn't exactly have the knack of easing into things, a point made by Athena outside. That's exactly what I was thinking when it was actually stated in the story. Heh, reiterated by his declaration at the end of the chapter.

Very cool so far. A bit "racy" in places, unnecessary to make it a good story.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [6 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 34 – Road Trip IV" from DieselDriver
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I have to wonder what these guys are using for shoe soles. Most shoes wouldn't last 5 seconds at the speeds and stresses involved in running at supersonic speed. Neither would their cloths.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [5 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 27 – Before the Dance II" from DieselDriver
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Well now! That was even better than what I thought they'd do to the football imbeciles.

If it makes any difference I vote for Chloe to get Clark and Midori to get Xander.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [4 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 26 – Before the Dance" from DieselDriver
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I see some football players trussed up as scarecrows very very soon. With Pictures in the school newspaper.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [4 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 23 – Scarecrow II" from DieselDriver
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Oh HO HO! This is going to be interesting. Electrical powers against the God of Thunder???
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [4 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 20 – Happenings" from DieselDriver
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"he watched as a young woman recited an oath that would forever change the course of her life forever."

Just pointing out an error in your proofreading. Note that the word "forever" is used twice.

I noticed another spot of a minor error but don't remember exactly where. Simple typo I think, a wrong form of a word.

Story is interesting, I'm sure looking forward to seeing where you go with this. Woo Hoo! That's a hot looking Lolita.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [4 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14 -- Surprises" from DieselDriver
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Wow! What a family. Superman and Thor as brothers. Quite a combo to confront any villain.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [3 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13 – Truth and Consequences II" from DieselDriver
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They are going to have to tell Clark sooner or later that he's not human. He NEEDS to know.

Oh and I just noticed that this story hasn't apparently been updated since 08. I hope you haven't abandoned it. I really hate it when people post stories and then don't finish them. It's a despicable act. If an author doesn't have a finish planned then they shouldn't post the story. This story is way to good to be abandoned.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [3 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 51 –Metamorphosis VI" from MaxPayne
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There should definitely be more Xander/Chloe fics. I wouldn't mind seeing a Xander/Lana fic, either... I wish this would get finished but i understand that writers have lives outside ficdom. Great story,anyway!
Review By [MaxPayne] • Date [14 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 51 –Metamorphosis VI" from Eljin
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the story is great i really like it. i like how you take the time to go into how the gang is feeling and going thru at this time of change. however while i havent seen much smallville, it feels like youre writing a hell of a lot and not much time is passing.
Review By [Eljin] • Date [31 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 51 –Metamorphosis VI" from Zarthrax
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Hoping you come back to update this. Still looking forward to Graduation Day and Tara's arrival.
Review By [Zarthrax] • Date [26 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 51 –Metamorphosis VI" from Isamaru
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Wow, this story is absolutely amazing. I don't even watch smallville, and now I want to. Thanks for an amazing story, and I hope you pick up the pen again sometime in the future.
Review By [Isamaru] • Date [20 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 51 –Metamorphosis VI" from SpacedCadet
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PLEASE do more!!!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [18 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 51 –Metamorphosis VI" from Zarthrax
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Really hope you come back to updating this. It's highly enjoyable!
Review By [Zarthrax] • Date [4 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 51 –Metamorphosis VI" from shiorantou
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five Years later i still want to know what happens next...
Review By [shiorantou] • Date [6 Aug 13] • Not Rated
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