great story kinda wish it was still being worked on

I'm saddened that this story seems to have been dropped, as it is an amazing look at Batman, the DCU, and the post-Chosen Slayerverse.

This was a big surprise for me. Didn't expect to like it as much as I did. Characterizations, looming threat and interesting expositions make it an interesting read. Shame you haven't updated it in a looong time. Hope some powers will bring you back.

I'm pretty sure that chapter #9 is cursed.

No Hyperbole here. I've had to attempt re-writes a half dozen times due to corrupt saves and have replaced my computer twice, and the last time my computer LITERALLY caught fire (involving a fire extinguisher and replacing the carpet) WHILE I WAS TYPING. It freaked me out badly enough that that I stopped writing for a while.

I'm trying to get back to the keyboard, but can't make any promises.

I hope there's more to come, 'cause this story is great!

Good job so far... I'd like to read more if you ever get back to it.

Ok so who would the Doc rather face off against?

More please. This has been sitting idle for a bit.

This is NOT abandoned, I'm just suffering from a real bad case of 'don'wanna. As in I should vacuum the floor, but I 'don'wanna. I am trying to get over it and I do hope to start writing again soon-ish.

I am truly sorry for my unreliability. :(

Nifty cool piece.

Please keep writing this, it is great and I really want to see where you go with this.

Thanks for a great story.

Hey, I wanna know what Etrigan said about Justice vs Scooby too!
jen

Really like this. I think the Slayers may be a little overdone on the power factor, after all, the Bat Clan has taken out more powerful things on a semi-regular basis (Killer Croc etc... not to mention the times they saved the world ought to surpass the Scoobies esp. considering how old Bruce is... although it is true three in a room may be much, but it depends on stuff like if they can work together well in a confined space). Still, small qualm aside, enjoyable read.

Boy, are people going to hate one of the future scenes with the Pack ;)

Now here is something I'm planing to place in a Author's Note when I eventually get past my injury induced writer's block.

I firmly believe if parity of characters in cross-overs.

In broad strokes that means that I believe that the characters of one fandom should NEVER overshadow the other characters in a cross-over (Otherwise, what is the point of including the inferior characters other than as some kind of punishment).

Sooooo...Batman vs. Random Slayer= V: Batman

Batman vs. Buffy, or Faith...well, taking random elements out of it (which I can't see happening) I'm leaning towards a 40/60 split for who wins (With who gets the 60% changing depending on how I feel on any day)

Batman vs. Buffy/Faith + two other slayers with 3+ years of experience as Slayers and working together...weeeeeellllllll.

Despite that I hope I can keep your interest in the future.

More please!!!!

Oooo....update soon please!

Sorry for the delay, however, a few days after I dropped the last chapter I broke the first rule of working in a warehouse which is 'If something is going to fall, do NOT try to stop it'. As a result I caught my hand between some very heavy boxes and a very immobile set of shelves. I'm just now (13/01/09) getting to the point where I can type again.

Nice cliffhanger ;)

If this is the story I think it is, as I'm hopin', then it's likely Dr. Fate *really* misunderstood his question :D

Ooooorrrrrr, I'm getting ready to through out a big twist in the next few chapters. It won't be the next one though. The Hyenas are next 8)

“So, tell me Rich Boy, have you ever wondered what it was like to see a girl barely out of high school terminate a...thing...That had been specifically designed to stop Superman?”

To be fair, that was more like the best parts of the Scooby Gang formed into one being.

Send a construct to kill a construct!


“By the way, Rich Boy, if you do talk to Blood, ask him if Etrigan would rather face off against The Justice League, or The Scooby Gang. I'm curious.”

I'd love to see that scene!


“That would be great, Alfred,” Bruce agreed, the corners of his mouth turning slightly upward. Some times the aging vigilante wondered if maybe the reality of the situation was that Alfred was the legendary 'Great Detective' and that he was the sidekick.

Hmmm. Alfred as Sherlock with Bruce as Watson, his sidekick who does all the leg work? That fits a lot better than I thought it would.


“This line is secure.” The Detective prodded.

“I know, but I want to look you in the eye when I lose your friendship.”

???

Did I flip two pages at once?

Damn cliffies!

Great chapter.

Edit: My comment about the construct vs construct and how they interpreted it wasn't a complaint. I like the way it was handled, it makes perfect sense. I was just pointing out that the Scoobs has made Buffy into a similar creation to take out Adam.

Well, *Deep Breath* the Scoobies vs. Adam thing is a little to complicated for a quick comment here, but it has to do with who saw what and how much they understood.

And if you hate that cliffie you are truly destined to hate me ;)

Your comparing the Justice League to the Scooby Gang?

Not specifically per say. Just different worlds and the places in those worlds the groups inhabit...Kinda