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Review of chapter "Chapter #8: Need to Know" from Tjack
Review:
Wow. I guess I'll jump on the bandwagon with everyone else and beg for a continuation of this one. A few points to mention though...
1) I noticed the Batman Beyond reference in the call to Waller and have myself enjoyed dropping that JLU episode on BB fans in the past.
2). If the rhyming dialog for Etrigan is throwing you, don't forget Bruce would rather speak to Jason than his alter ego any day.
3). I know that Rule One is "Don't Die", and apparently Rule Three is "Don't Piss Off Willow", but I missed what Rule Two is.
4) Is Xander's banishment from Egypt in this series the same as the one mentioned in another of your stories?
5). If the answer to question four is yes than that implies a Blood Lines universe and that may hold an answer to your writers block/curse. How about the story of what happened in China when a ton of Slayers dropped down on a certain invisible vampire. Maybe just to keep the crossover vibe happening, a certain Master of a Korean Martial Art & his apprentice might be after the same target.
At any rate, I truly enjoined this story and hope to see more in the future.
Thanks, Tjack.
Comments from author:
Okay, in order:

1) I am/was 2, or 3 chapters from a nifty Amalgam reference as well
2) true, but it was intended as a throw away line and part of my issue was/is trying to fit it in
3) Rule Two is 'Mess with one of us, mess with all of us'
4) more of a near-by alternate reality similarity kind of thing
5) I was/am kinda planing on her picking up Lamont Cranston on retreat in his monetary

I refuse to admit that this is dead. perhaps after I finish the first 'Symbol of Hope' story I'll give this another shot.
Review By [Tjack] • Date [29 Jul 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter #8: Need to Know" from snakeyes
Review:
great story kinda wish it was still being worked on
Review By [snakeyes] • Date [21 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter #8: Need to Know" from Letomo
Review:
I'm saddened that this story seems to have been dropped, as it is an amazing look at Batman, the DCU, and the post-Chosen Slayerverse.
Review By [Letomo] • Date [26 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter #8: Need to Know" from warfolomei
Review:
This was a big surprise for me. Didn't expect to like it as much as I did. Characterizations, looming threat and interesting expositions make it an interesting read. Shame you haven't updated it in a looong time. Hope some powers will bring you back.
Comments from author:
I'm pretty sure that chapter #9 is cursed.

No Hyperbole here. I've had to attempt re-writes a half dozen times due to corrupt saves and have replaced my computer twice, and the last time my computer LITERALLY caught fire (involving a fire extinguisher and replacing the carpet) WHILE I WAS TYPING. It freaked me out badly enough that that I stopped writing for a while.

I'm trying to get back to the keyboard, but can't make any promises.
Review By [warfolomei] • Date [19 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter #8: Need to Know" from firedrakegirl
Review:
I hope there's more to come, 'cause this story is great!
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [29 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter #8: Need to Know" from MistressRed
Review:
Good job so far... I'd like to read more if you ever get back to it.
Review By [MistressRed] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter #8: Need to Know" from FireWolfe
Review:
Ok so who would the Doc rather face off against?

More please. This has been sitting idle for a bit.
Comments from author:
This is NOT abandoned, I'm just suffering from a real bad case of 'don'wanna. As in I should vacuum the floor, but I 'don'wanna. I am trying to get over it and I do hope to start writing again soon-ish.

I am truly sorry for my unreliability. :(
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [3 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter #8: Need to Know" from batzulger
Review:
Nifty cool piece.
Review By [batzulger] • Date [25 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter #8: Need to Know" from (Past Donor)Nycorson
Review:
Please keep writing this, it is great and I really want to see where you go with this.

Thanks for a great story.
Review By [(Past Donor)Nycorson] • Date [28 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter #8: Need to Know" from ferball
Review:
Hey, I wanna know what Etrigan said about Justice vs Scooby too!
jen
Review By [ferball] • Date [18 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter #8: Need to Know" from Skoellya
Review:
Really like this. I think the Slayers may be a little overdone on the power factor, after all, the Bat Clan has taken out more powerful things on a semi-regular basis (Killer Croc etc... not to mention the times they saved the world ought to surpass the Scoobies esp. considering how old Bruce is... although it is true three in a room may be much, but it depends on stuff like if they can work together well in a confined space). Still, small qualm aside, enjoyable read.
Comments from author:
Boy, are people going to hate one of the future scenes with the Pack ;)

Now here is something I'm planing to place in a Author's Note when I eventually get past my injury induced writer's block.

I firmly believe if parity of characters in cross-overs.

In broad strokes that means that I believe that the characters of one fandom should NEVER overshadow the other characters in a cross-over (Otherwise, what is the point of including the inferior characters other than as some kind of punishment).

Sooooo...Batman vs. Random Slayer= V: Batman

Batman vs. Buffy, or Faith...well, taking random elements out of it (which I can't see happening) I'm leaning towards a 40/60 split for who wins (With who gets the 60% changing depending on how I feel on any day)

Batman vs. Buffy/Faith + two other slayers with 3+ years of experience as Slayers and working together...weeeeeellllllll.

Despite that I hope I can keep your interest in the future.
Review By [Skoellya] • Date [23 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter #8: Need to Know" from Almadynis
Review:
More please!!!!
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [3 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter #8: Need to Know" from Elleria
Review:
Oooo....update soon please!
Comments from author:
Sorry for the delay, however, a few days after I dropped the last chapter I broke the first rule of working in a warehouse which is 'If something is going to fall, do NOT try to stop it'. As a result I caught my hand between some very heavy boxes and a very immobile set of shelves. I'm just now (13/01/09) getting to the point where I can type again.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [3 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter #8: Need to Know" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Nice cliffhanger ;)

If this is the story I think it is, as I'm hopin', then it's likely Dr. Fate *really* misunderstood his question :D
Comments from author:
Ooooorrrrrr, I'm getting ready to through out a big twist in the next few chapters. It won't be the next one though. The Hyenas are next 8)
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [29 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter #8: Need to Know" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
“So, tell me Rich Boy, have you ever wondered what it was like to see a girl barely out of high school terminate a...thing...That had been specifically designed to stop Superman?”

To be fair, that was more like the best parts of the Scooby Gang formed into one being.

Send a construct to kill a construct!


“By the way, Rich Boy, if you do talk to Blood, ask him if Etrigan would rather face off against The Justice League, or The Scooby Gang. I'm curious.”

I'd love to see that scene!


“That would be great, Alfred,” Bruce agreed, the corners of his mouth turning slightly upward. Some times the aging vigilante wondered if maybe the reality of the situation was that Alfred was the legendary 'Great Detective' and that he was the sidekick.

Hmmm. Alfred as Sherlock with Bruce as Watson, his sidekick who does all the leg work? That fits a lot better than I thought it would.


“This line is secure.” The Detective prodded.

“I know, but I want to look you in the eye when I lose your friendship.”

???

Did I flip two pages at once?

Damn cliffies!

Great chapter.

Edit: My comment about the construct vs construct and how they interpreted it wasn't a complaint. I like the way it was handled, it makes perfect sense. I was just pointing out that the Scoobs has made Buffy into a similar creation to take out Adam.
Comments from author:
Well, *Deep Breath* the Scoobies vs. Adam thing is a little to complicated for a quick comment here, but it has to do with who saw what and how much they understood.

And if you hate that cliffie you are truly destined to hate me ;)
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [7 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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