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Review of chapter "Chapter 9 Did you order an insane vampire?" from Scathach
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This was great!! Are you going to continue it?
Review By [Scathach] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9 Did you order an insane vampire?" from bradsan
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Pity that you never updated this story so I'll never know how it ends.
Now about Xander how old is he six or seven, you should think that he is old enough to know that when Buffy didn't tell, it wasn't his to spill. But hey he is Xander as long his secrets are save it's no problem telling others especially Buffy's.

It's strange that the Slayer won't protect Buffy's mind, because Buffy's mind experience are the same as the Slayers. so I find that rather strange. And I always found it very shameful how Xavier and Jean don't feel any shame to prob in somebodies mind without their permission. If it would happen to me I would be very mad at them. Your mind is very personal and they have no right probing in somebodies mind when there is no directly danger involved.

Still a pity I will never know how this story ends. You did a good job with this story. It's well written and easy to read. good job
Review By [bradsan] • Date [26 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9 Did you order an insane vampire?" from dkwr
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i love this story. hope you update soon.
Review By [dkwr] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9 Did you order an insane vampire?" from firedrakegirl
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Please continue!! I love it! There are a few mistakes, but overall,, an amazing story.
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [7 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9 Did you order an insane vampire?" from divaslayer
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I love this story so far and I can't wait to read more. Please, please, please, please update soon. Please?

Dani
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [9 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9 Did you order an insane vampire?" from Dragonelf
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I have just reread this story and I really hope you get inspired to continue this story.

::Gives the muse a Galactus sized jar of encouragement cookies::
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [19 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9 Did you order an insane vampire?" from ChloeWinchester
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I so wish you would update this soon. I love this story.
Review By [ChloeWinchester] • Date [16 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One Buffy Sees Scotty" from ChloeWinchester
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Well did your muse stop blushing yet, cause i want more please. I love this story.
Review By [ChloeWinchester] • Date [31 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9 Did you order an insane vampire?" from Emeraldfire
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Great fic!!!!!! I want more please!
Comments from author:
*gasp again* gosh another perfect ten. Haha. Thankyou guys. I shall grant your wish as soon as my muse stops blushing at your praises. =]
Review By [Emeraldfire] • Date [31 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9 Did you order an insane vampire?" from soulfulone
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this is a cool story....and because i like it as much as i do, i'm gonna make one, and only one complaint: you need a beta b/c the grammer and spelling errors are nearly ruining your story!

near the end of the last chapter when Buffy was hugging Logan, you said "the slayer sighed with contempt" i think you might have meant contentment.....b/c contempt is completely out of context with the rest of what you wrote......don't get me wrong....i love this story.....but the small errors get in the way of ones enjoyment!

other than that: excellent chapter!
Comments from author:
Thankyou sooo much for the high rating. And your most certainly right. I do need a beta. My grammer and spelling is pretty bad, lol.
Review By [soulfulone] • Date [30 Oct 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9 Did you order an insane vampire?" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
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Excellent. So happy to see this update. hmm can't faith just wake up and be good? or maybe Angel can come back and watch over the hellmouth. hmm maybe she will get her X powers manefest and have to stay to learn to control them. Sounds good to me! : )
Comments from author:
Just because i love ya soooo much. I'll give you a little insight. Just a TINY sneak peak. Faith will be getting some kind of redemption in this series, not nessicarily this fic, but deffinately in the Mystic and Men series... ALSO I'm bringing Angel in FAIRLY soon to play a part. He will also feature more in the story that will come after this one.. Im hoping if my muse is nice enough I can write it soon enough.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [30 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9 Did you order an insane vampire?" from Serenity
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eeee! i loved this, it is so evilly delicious, you must continue, or you might drive me more insane than drusilla, and that would be fun, but very bad. So pretty please update with Logan on top.
Comments from author:
OH GOSH!!! a nine out of ten. *hugs* I love you. hehe. thanks sooo much. means a lot.
Review By [Serenity] • Date [30 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9 Did you order an insane vampire?" from heathenseyes
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Who wouldn't want Logan, really. I like your longer chapters and can't wait for the next one.

I love Dru, she was the more dangerous one out of her and Darla, even Angel and Spike because you never knew what she was going to do. Being crazy and gifted with premonitions comes in handy for a vampire some times, she wasn't the strongest, but she was the unknown.

:)
Comments from author:
*gasps* Thankyou for the perfect ten. your comments truelly lift me up. Thankyou darlin.
Review By [heathenseyes] • Date [30 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9 Did you order an insane vampire?" from HunterH
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YEAH! Please write more soon:)
Comments from author:
First review on the new chapter. thankyou you ure SOOOOOOO kind.
Review By [HunterH] • Date [30 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8 Someone my Age" from HunterH
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Please write more soon :)
Review By [HunterH] • Date [12 Oct 07] • Not Rated
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