WOW!!! I mean, WOW!!! This was an incredible read. I really like how you fleshed everything out the way you did. It was a great story and I'm just sorry it isn't going on. I really can't say how much I liked this!
Review By [zillagirl] • Date [28 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
hmm..I do wander about your disclaimer...since I have read a story you wrote that plagarised another author...without their permission:}
As to the story..its an incomplete fragment, no background story, lots of unaswered questions and a few plot holes (including the fact that Amazons don't have Kings and based on their philosophy, never will)
BUT I can see where you have used ideas from The Wandereverse and The Journeyverse to write this, and more than likely from elsewhere as well. I have read most of your other fics so I can say that.
More than likely, this was meant to be more..but you couldn't write the before and after and so only left this incomplete fragment..
Unrated for that reason, it feels empty
ThunderGod
Review By [ThunderGod] • Date [23 Nov 06] • Not Rated