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Review of chapter "Escalation!" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Damn! Another good one that has fallen by the wayside... Any chance it got published elsewhere?
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [17 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Escalation!" from Sydonai
Review:
Very nice, I like it. The only problem is that sentence near the end; "I told you to shut up the fuck up."
Review By [Sydonai] • Date [28 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Enter Darkness" from (Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
A unique premise here, but I do feel obliged to point out that Peacebringers have inherent flight, but no access to Teleportation (Warshades do, however).
Comments from author:
Futurias was bonded to both a Nictus and a Peacebringer, but only one could be active at a time.
Review By [(Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [27 Aug 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Escalation!" from war
Review:
nice action scenes.good to see Xander,Willow and Jessie get some training.good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I guess City of Heroes just isn't that popular or engaging. :(

I'm glad someone is enjoying it!
Review By [war] • Date [2 Feb 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Enter Darkness" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [9 Dec 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Enter Darkness" from war
Review:
good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [8 Dec 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Enter the Light." from darkwwwish
Review:
when i first saw the title i thought it said "bacon of hope" LOL thats what i get for being 1/2 asleep while reading
Review By [darkwwwish] • Date [24 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Enter the Light." from Bobboky
Review:
excellent
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [24 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Enter the Light." from Greywizard
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Very interesting story here. Don't recall seeing any cross with 'City of Heroes' previously.

Looking forward to seeing what comes next.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [19 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Enter the Light." from war
Review:
good story hope you continue.
Review By [war] • Date [19 Nov 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Enter the Light." from Guardian
Review:
Nice first chapter! BTW, portal corps should be able to track heroes to other dimentions, no? Would be nice to have a Task Force drop in when things get really bad.
Review By [Guardian] • Date [19 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Enter the Light." from Malakai
Review:
This sounds like a good start to the story and a pretty cool idea too! Although it does feel like it is moving a little quick. In one chapter you have 7 or 8 confrontations (fights / the plane / the ptbs / darla etc.) and not a real lot of "real life" stuff. maybe spending a little while doing a shopping trip where there are no fights but a little comedy, then a random fight on the way home, then a bit where buffy trys to convince her to stay with her , followed by a doe eyed xander , and then a bit about buffy trying to convince her mum( i'm auzzie so i spell it differently) and maybe letting both their secrets out to her( i alway hated how they kept her in the dark). but back to the point btvs is a angst/drama/action/comedy series so you have to add all of those element to your story to balance it out. Still very cool idea
Comments from author:
Just a little tidbit, but Futurias wouldn't know what a normal life is. As far as she knows, catching airplanes and stopping bank robberies is just what she is supposed to do. Technically, those were her normal moments.
Review By [Malakai] • Date [19 Nov 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Enter the Light." from grd
Review:
I too play City of Heroes, and I am enjoying your tale. Please continue. The PTBs being humilated is always fun. They're just scared about being replaced as the reality's guardians.
Comments from author:
Glad to here! I play on Virtue, global of @Futurias!
Review By [grd] • Date [19 Nov 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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