Review of chapter "The Search for More Kink" from zigpal
Review:
Love the first two parts of this, and I can't wait until the Bot gets more involved. Who did Willow think she was if she thought she could forget about the littlest Summers. and maybe Faith can keep Buffy way too busy to have her worry about what Willow and Dawn are doing.
Comments from author:
Dawn gets what Dawn wants! ;)
And while Buffy *might* accept a Dawn/Willow relationship there's no way she'd approve of all the kink. It's her little sister after all! And no Faith!kink will be had in this fic...it's too easy. And it's too unbelievable in my mind that Buffy and Faith would get kinky too. (Wait...did I really say something was too unbelievable to happen in this fic? The guy who just wrote Willow/Dawn kink!porn?)
Now Faith/Buffybot is a possibility. *innocent look #37*
Review By [zigpal] • Date [13 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Search for More Kink" from CPTSkip
Review:
Lol! On the one to ten kink-o-meter scale your story is an 11 or maybe 11.5. But as kinky/sexy as your story was, it also made me laugh a lot. And as warped as your characters were, they were still recognizable. Well done and I hope there will be more to Willow's and Dawn's adventures. Lol!
Comments from author:
Yay! Review Love!
I'll probably do more Willow/Dawn kink. I had this one done for a couple of months but I forgot to post it. LoL. Right now I'm focusing my limited writing time on the weekly challenges at the spn_btvs LJ community. Then of course there will be Buffybot kink. But you *can* feel confident that at some point there will be more kink from me. :)
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [13 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Extra point for the attention to detail and the nifty kink for Dawn. Perfectly described and disturbing/hot enough to make me blush. *applauds* This was definitely kinky fun with a dash of humor at the end to make it prefect!
Thank you, thank you, thank you for sharing this link with me and for posting this little piece of sweaty for all to read and enjoy! Ava
Comments from author:
Thanks for the kind words. :)
I'm glad we could all enjoy a little kinky fun. And it's good to know you like my kink-fic writing skill. Now I have something to barter with when I need some hot photo manips. LOL
Review By [Ava] • Date [2 Dec 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Oh very nice!! Well written and very thought out for something as smutty and delightful as this!! You did a very good job in incorporating the different kink elements. One other question, can I join you in the gutter? LOL.
Comments from author:
Sure...the gutter is roomy. Come on down. Just be sure to bring your own kink...there's only so much to go around down here.
Thanks for the review. :)
Review By [DaniShafer] • Date [28 Nov 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Kinky, humorous and well written. Seriously hot, too.
Yes, I think the fallout from this may be spectacular. Lots of weird behaviour and a threesome, maybe?
As a fantasy this is great. (In real life Dawn would probably faint or suffocate. Come on, gagged and only able to breath to small nose holes, while being burrowed face-down in soft pillows and - lets say - being taken advantage of? That's why you put the gag in last, so you can remove it first in case there is a problem.)
I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
I'll have to remember that if I find myself in a similar situation. ;)
Any volunteers?
Oh and since I'm a perfectionist I may go back and change that bit. I also saw some misspelled words and such when I was re-reading.
Review By [KarlStahl] • Date [27 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Wow nice story. I see that is complete but I would love too see another chapter or a sequel.
Comments from author:
Thanks. :)
It's possible but not likely. The best I can think is a story where Willow and Dawn act really weird around each other. Of course *we* would know what happened to make it weird. :)
Review By [Klyk] • Date [26 Nov 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]