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Review of chapter "31: A Step Forward" from deathgeonous
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I am sad, because this is good, and it has not been updated for quite some time. Well, thanks for writing what you did of it, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [30 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "31: A Step Forward" from Rune
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This is a nice slow developing relationship between Jareth and Sarah. I like slow. Its good you have Sarah as powerful, good you have her not suddenly a goddess. The entire thing is very believable. But where is Luna Lovegood? I can see the two girls as fast friends, Luna acts somewhat Fae, she might even have heard of Jareth. And I can see Luna following Sarah to the Underground later. Please update this soon.
Review By [Rune] • Date [27 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "31: A Step Forward" from spring
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This chapter is very funny to read in many places. I love this wonderful chapter and look forward for more such wonderful chapters.
Review By [spring] • Date [13 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "31: A Step Forward" from (Recent Donor)deitarionSSokolow
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This is always such a refreshing story to see new chapters for... especially the conversations between Jareth and Dumbledore. So few authors try for something like that and fewer still succeed.
Review By [(Recent Donor)deitarionSSokolow] • Date [13 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "31: A Step Forward" from jupitersdaughter
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Yay for Jareth learning about Jareth!
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [13 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "31: A Step Forward" from Dragonelf
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Yay, new chapter.

::Gives the plot bunny some Scooby Snacks::

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Prepare for trouble, and make it double
To protect the world from devastation,
To unite all people within our nation,
To denounce the evil of truth and love,
To extend our reach to the stars above
- Pokémon (Team Rocket motto)
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [12 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Why." from Dragonelf
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::Gives the plot bunny some Carrot Shortcake::

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Everything you can imagine is real.
- Pablo Picasso
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [6 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Why." from justapiranha
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i have been reading this all day and I love it.
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [18 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bets, a Revenge Missed and a Plan" from (Recent Donor)deitarionSSokolow
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Nice to see how you've continued writing this. It's rare to find well-done fics which add a little levity to the interactions with Draco.

I also think it's sheer genius to have the Weasley twins working on the wards. :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)deitarionSSokolow] • Date [19 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Sorting and Beginning" from (Recent Donor)deitarionSSokolow
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Quality is one thing, but originality AND quality is quite another. So far, I'm enjoying this quite a bit since it's, to the best of my knowledge, a very unique crossover.

There are a couple of points I think are downsides though:
1. I think it'd have been much better if she weren't an overlooked witch prior to the events of Labyrinth. The whole "overlooked wizard/witch" (usually witch, for some reason) angle is greatly overdone and makes the story less original and interesting both by association and by giving authors an easy shortcut around coming up with more original ideas to drive the plot.
2. Having the sorting hat's magic result in some sort of painful dissonance really bugs me because it implies that either the hat is incompatible with goblin magic in some painfully fundamental way that it's apparently unaware of, or that something is seriously wrong with Sarah as a side-effect of having her potential for wanded magic overridden by her new potential for Jareth's spells.
Review By [(Recent Donor)deitarionSSokolow] • Date [19 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bets, a Revenge Missed and a Plan" from Dragonelf
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::Feeds the plot bunny::
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [18 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bets, a Revenge Missed and a Plan" from jupitersdaughter
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*gasps for laughter* ohmigawd, i needed that! thanks!
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [18 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bets, a Revenge Missed and a Plan" from Misery
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I just love this story its brilliant
Review By [Misery] • Date [17 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Joker In The Deck" from zafaran
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Oh, my. The progress on this story is quite entertaining. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next in Sarah's educational journey to control the powers she acquired from Jareth. {snicker} I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [8 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Joker In The Deck" from Dragonelf
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Yay, new chapters!!! I hope we will see more chapters in a near future.

::Feeds the plot bunny::
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [28 May 08] • Not Rated
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