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Review of chapter "Past Due" from bucksavage
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Fraggles? You added FRAGGLE ROCK TO A FAN FIC? LMAO God that is priceless. The whole scene where Fraser talks to his dad's ghost? Utterly hilarious. This was exceptionally well done!
Review By [bucksavage] • Date [14 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Past Due" from (Past Donor)James
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Nice addition. Loved Faith/Xander making up.
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [12 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Past Due" from SuddenMaelstrom
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"There was this kingdom of the blind. They needed a new king. Things got out of hand."

Coolest answer to the everpresent eye-question yet.
Review By [SuddenMaelstrom] • Date [18 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Past Due" from mymatedave
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“Dad, only you would be stubborn enough to argue against your own existence."

Love that line, so very Fraser-ish. Really enjoying the series.
Review By [mymatedave] • Date [5 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Past Due" from Elleria
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Love this.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [6 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Past Due" from BillieBog
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Found this series a few days ago and have loved reading them. The last scene is just perfect. Thanks so much for the series and I hope you keep on writing--and maybe post under your own name. Be sure and let all us lurkers who like your stuff know where you are.

Thanks for sharing
BB
Review By [BillieBog] • Date [13 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Past Due" from Bobboky
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very cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [23 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Past Due" from LFW
Review:
Very enjoyable
Due South is a great show
and Cupid was another great show
If Xander will be in Chicago with Cupid next will Due South visit?
Oh, and hang up on Giles again
Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [24 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Past Due" from KevinSchultz
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Hey - in general, I've really been enjoying this series. Oddly enough, I didn't notice that this was actually part of the "places he's been" until I got to the end; at that point, I thought you were brining in a lot of unsupported crossovers. But then Xander started talking about a fraggle, and I realized the connection. So it was all good. :)

Anyway - good use of dialog for Fraiser. Xander came across as getting more world-weary, which I think was kind of the point. Also, I thought you did a decent job with writing Faith as cocky, but nervous about talking to Xander - good point about "when was the last time you fought a Slayer?" question.

Some critiques: I never really got a good feel for the surrounding area, though - nothing made it really feel like Chicago, IMO. Also, while I thought it was very clever to slip the slayer the potion in the drink, the whole setup seemed a bit off. The effort involved to permanenetly strip a Slayer of their power seemed, well, relatively paltry. I can easily see Xander downplaying the effort and risk involved (maybe it put the entire coven at serious risk, and only THAT coven could have done it due to their connection to Willow, and it's a spell that works only because there are so may Slayers now instead of just 1), but the way it was presented made the task seem mundane.

Recommendation - some extra establishing shots would work - more description of the landscape and whatnot. Also, maybe a paragraph or two of Xander relaxing afterwards, and remarking "phew, I'm sure glad that didn't kill of the Coven, like it almost did last time", or something along those lines - a place to put the expository dialog for how the potion actually worked, and why they don't use it more often. (Another thought - being a Slayer is still a likely path to an early death - lots of girls probably would WANT to un-become the Slayer. Is this process still available to them?)
Review By [KevinSchultz] • Date [27 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Past Due" from AnnOfMidnight
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Nice! I don't know what the hell was up with the Fraggle, but I really liked the rythym of the story and how IC everyone was. Good job!
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [27 Nov 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Past Due" from arkeus
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Damn Funny :-)
There is a whole lot of Crossover there though, so that's a bit much.
Great work.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [27 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Past Due" from purrfus
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Very interesting solution to a difficult ethical issue. Looking forward to Playing Cupid.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [27 Nov 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Past Due" from physicsteach
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Great story, fun dialog, neat plot, excellent Faith and Xander interactions. Only downside is a high rate of typos/grammar errors.
Review By [physicsteach] • Date [27 Nov 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Past Due" from ElaineRhodes
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Fun story, as always! I love the dialog in particular.
Can't wait for the next chapter
Review By [ElaineRhodes] • Date [26 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Past Due" from ElaineRhodes
Review:
Fun story, as always! I love the dialog in particular.
Can't wait for the next chapter
Review By [ElaineRhodes] • Date [26 Nov 06] • Not Rated
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