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Review of chapter "Thirty-Five Minutes Ago" from Zeviz
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That was the best kind of surprise: I was completely surprised at the moment, but it made sense in hindsight. Now I guess I should reread the sections where Cameron or Dawn are mentioned.
Review By [Zeviz] • Date [8 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue: Twice" from DieselDriver
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Very cool ending. Twice.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [5 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Less Than the Sum" from DieselDriver
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If Cam dies, she's out of her contract right? So a bit of difficulty breathing, she dies, they resuscitate her she's free...I hope.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [5 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Glory of Lawndale High" from DieselDriver
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Ok, and after the throw, Cameron changes into the pteranodon she mentioned earlier and glides away in the air currents. There are bound to be a lot of updrafts from buildings whether from A/C heat exchangers or other things.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [5 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Thirty-Five Minutes Ago" from DieselDriver
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Ok, that's sneaky. Good idea but still mucho sneaky. Poor Cameron.

With that said, I've just discovered that the "Caleb" episodes of "Buffy the Vampire Slayer" are going to be on TV at 4:50 AM Thursday Morning (not sure pacific or eastern), forgot which channel. Hurray DVR! I've never watched them. won't be able to say that on Friday.
Hope someone reads this before then, May 8, 2014.

Ok, don't know where Dawn is, have I mentioned I have not read the book you are using. Looked at the summary on Amazon and decided "No, not only no but hell no." I don't like gory books. I also don't like bad endings. I guess that's why the Bible is my favorite book. Has a wonderful ending which has the benefit of being true.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [5 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In Cold Blood" from DieselDriver
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I simply cannot comprehend people who would be unable to kill one completely innocent person to save the entire planet from certain destruction. I'd do it in a heartbeat even if I knew it would condemn me to being dumped in Hell. It wouldn't bother me a bit. Only worry would be how many dead to save how many lives. Remember, Tokyo was firebombed and killed over 275,000 people, many innocent children, about 5 times as many died from the dropping of the first Atom Bomb in an attempt to get the Japanese government to surrender before we had to invade. That saved an estimated 2 million American soldiers lives and probably 5 to 10 million Japanese lives but still someone had to do it. Someone had to order it. Sometimes life sucks. But you do what has to be done or you are worthless.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [5 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Killing Time" from DieselDriver
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I have to wonder at this point if Darth Willow could take out Glorificus.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [5 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to Lawndale" from DieselDriver
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Oops. Back into the van and rental and vamoose. At least that seems the logical thing to me.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [5 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I'm Rubber and You're Glue" from DieselDriver
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I like that spell. I remember it being said (not as a spell) in rebuttal to smart ass remarks by other kids when I was in grammar school.

One of the sucky fortunes of war is that innocents get drawn in without knowing what is going on. Mostly they die. I kind of hope Jane doesn't die. She seems intelligent and quite resourceful mentally. An engaging person, who would be nice to be friends with.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [4 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Load, Aim, Fire" from DieselDriver
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The exact location of Sunnyhell is kind of muddy (pun intended) but if they are out in the desert and also in Kern County (I live in Kern County) there is a likely hood that they are someplace slightly north of California City, or at the opposite side, near Taft. Possibly as far north as Ridgecrest or somewhere out near Wasco. Not likely to be near Bakersfield which is very spread out. The places I mentioned are smaller and seem to have abandoned buildings around somewhat. If it had been San Bernardino County that gives a lot more area to consider but I'd suggest on the CA 58 near Hinckly the town Erin Brockovitch was from. Mostly abandoned but since you were specific that's out. Fun trying to figure out where they might be that's only a couple of hours out of downtown LA, not a small place in and of itself.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [3 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Most Beautiful Word in the English Language" from DieselDriver
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Yep, guns and bullets trump byzantine armor most any day. 9mm which has been pretty much the standard police pistol round for some time now is full metal jacket (FMJ) and good at penetration. Not my idea of an ideal police bullet but hey, it's what they were likely to have. I like jacketed hollow point bullets myself, that way the bullet is more likely to stay in the person you intended to shoot, assuming you are a competent shot. Heh! Lately the LA cops are not looking so good in that regard...

9mm FMJ's are likely as not to over penetrate and hit bystanders or others behind the intended target. Not good.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [3 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Me and You Against the World" from DieselDriver
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"Buffy and I in that regard"

Bleh, should have copied more of the sentence, doesn't matter really I'll give an example that should work. And sorry, don't remember which chapter I found this in but when you say something like "Jim considered me in that regard." you don't change it to "I" when you add another person it would still be "Jim considered Buffy and me in that regard". Anywhere "me" would be used instead of "I" you use the me even if there are other people in the same situation. You wouldn't say "I against the world" just as you wouldn't say "The world against I". This is correct: "The world against me" or The world against you and me".

As Felix would say "Righteeooo".
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [3 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue: Twice" from Spica
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Another awesome story.
Review By [Spica] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue: Twice" from Harry
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I think that Daria is going to make a excellent Slayer. And should B need her help, just call and Daria will come to help out. Welcome to the Slayer family Daria. THIS is what you were suppose to have been if that murderer hadn't messed things up!
Review By [Harry] • Date [21 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Daria You Were Meant to Be" from Harry
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I don't think that Daria is going to go for separation. I think that she and Faith work too well together for them to split up again. And that is what she is going to tell the Witches.
Review By [Harry] • Date [21 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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