You've hit the Lawndale characters spot on. Jane's initial characterization was acceptable, but progressed to sheer brilliance over the course of the story. And I cheered when Mr. DeMartino JOINED the FIGHT. Go Lawndale! Now I'm left wondering if DFM is going to hook up with Trent. You know it'll end up as a song :)
"I've got a Slayer in my head; She's a wildcat in bed! It's a mystery to me, her multipersonality. Yeah!" --from the Mystik Spiral concept album, "Gott Ist Tot"
> Since half the problems on a starship of that era seemed to stem from the transporters, Lynette often wondered why they didn’t simply use the shuttlecraft exclusively.
Because the only thing less reliable than Starfleet's transporters were their shuttlecraft.
Review By [DonSample] • Date [27 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Love the story. "Faria" is actually both an Indian female first name, and an Italian last name. (I thought it was an Italian male first name when I started using it online.)
Review By [FariaLyton] • Date [26 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue: Twice" from Bluejello
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A sequel that is every bit as good as the first, congrats! And bonus points for Anya doing the happy dance over the dead bunny.
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [22 Dec 07] • Not Rated
I love it :) And to echo my comment for the first story: that's without any actual knowledge of that comic in the addition of being new to Daria universe :)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [25 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue: Twice" from Dragonhulk
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Once again, a truly amazing story. It will be very interesting to see how the new Faith/Daria evolve now that they are combined if you continue this series. Though if you do may I suggest that you use the series option that the site offers, it's much easier than tracking down the next installment by reading the summery to every story you write.
Review By [Dragonhulk] • Date [22 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue: Twice" from KarlStahl
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Great story.
Review By [KarlStahl] • Date [9 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Utterly wonderful - as I have said many times throughout this epic :)
I really hope you decide to use this 'verse again sometime.
And, thanks for writing.
Review By [Jewel] • Date [9 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue: Twice" from FohkuKohgeki
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This story was muy bueno!
Review By [FohkuKohgeki] • Date [8 May 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue: Twice" from Bushranger
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Great work. :-)
Review By [Bushranger] • Date [8 May 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue: Twice" from Arekanderu
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I loved it.Great job.But i was wondering are you planing on making a crossover with the show Heroes?The plot with Jessica/Nikki especially when she is in prison can work really well with your universe
Review By [Arekanderu] • Date [8 May 07] • Not Rated