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Review of chapter "Training: Or New ways to make MORE Garbage!" from Sdarian
Review:
Keeping her being the Slayer a secret from her mom?

Buffy outright told her mom. And got sent to a nut house for it, as both of her parents thought that she was crazy because she thought she was a slayer and that vampires were real.

Sure, later on (end of season 2? 3?) they told her again and had enough proof to make her believe it, but Buffy first told her when she burned down the gym.
Comments from author:
And what would you say to spending Halloween Night as Endora from the old TV show Bewitched, and then waking up the next morning to discover that you still have all the powers, and then slowly, over a few weeks time, learning to control and master them, as evidence?

;) Thanks For The Review!

-- Joshua
Review By [Sdarian] • Date [21 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Star . . . WHAT?!!" from SnowyMountain
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One of the better Halloween stories out there that I have read. There are quite a number that I do enjoy that follow the same premise that someone afflicted by the Halloween Spell retained something from their possessor; but usually they restrict it to only one person. I always wonder why just one of the Scoobies retained it and not everyone. Your story is far more compelling in that EVERYBODY has retained something and things are radically changing as a result with various different series you've thrown into the mix, albeit some of which I know nearly nothing about. Still, it's a good read and I hope that you will continue it.
Review By [SnowyMountain] • Date [7 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Star . . . WHAT?!!" from Nomma
Review:
Oh, dude! This is freakin' awesome!
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it.

;>

-- Joshua
Review By [Nomma] • Date [13 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Star . . . WHAT?!!" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Truly awesome stuff please update soon.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [22 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Star . . . WHAT?!!" from CJNyfalt
Review:
Well, quite nice so far, but you seems to have forgotten that there are key players (Billy Fordham, Eyghon, Order of Teraka, Kendra, Spike, Dru, Angel) in Buffy canon that should still be around and need to get involved/be dealt with.
Review By [CJNyfalt] • Date [9 May 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Training: Or New ways to make MORE Garbage!" from SAK
Review:
I read this story and its spin-offs on "fanfiction" and really like them but I do have a question

In ch 3 "Training: Or New ways to make MORE Garbage!" Willow says that "All the kids that bought devil costumes or demon masks from him, rather surprisingly, decided to dress as something else entirely"
yet in ch 10 "Suffer the Children" there are 60+ kids who were turned into demons. Was Willow just wrong or is it something else?

Please update again soon, especially XSlayerettes since i want to see what happens next.
Comments from author:
Yeah, about that...

Chapter 3 was written LONG before I'd even gotten to Chapter 9, let alone ten. Between the posting of Chapter 3 and the writing of Chapter 10, however, I talked to all my friends about "Chaotic Circumstances" and a few of them didn't like the "convenient" way of making the demon-kids not be stuck as permanent demons. Eventually, they changed my mind, obviously.

Thing is, I've also had Willow say that she can't sense any other powerful telepaths, and she also cannot sense anybody that dressed as Charles Xavier/Professor X.

I'm going to change that too and reveal the weakness Willow's been falling into.

A Telepath's POV affects how they see the world. If Willow refuses to accept anything that she doesn't already know, then she won't learn anything until it's put right under her nose. In other words, Willow must learn to keep an "open mind" in order to even sense the things she's unfamiliar with.

I can't make it too easy on these guys! In fact, so far, Xander and Buffy have had the easiest of it, as Buffy's letting the Cyclops-remains have more and more control, not to mention getting the boost in her powers, while Xander... well you can read for yourself how Xander's taking things.

Unfortunately, CC-Prime is going to be put on hiatus for the moment. I'm waiting on another author to finish another CC story that will be pivotol to what happens next there.

As for X-Slayerettes, I'm working on that day by day, but I'm not sure when that'll be out or ready for posting.

;>

-- Joshua
Review By [SAK] • Date [1 Mar 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Star . . . WHAT?!!" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [21 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Star . . . WHAT?!!" from janusi
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I enjoyed the story quite a bit and am curious to see where you are taking this.
Review By [janusi] • Date [5 Dec 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Star . . . WHAT?!!" from purrfus
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This is so much fun to read.


As lovely as it is to see so much of a new story at one time, I think you are doing yourself and the story a disservice posting the way you have. Depending on the number of new stories posted yours will disappear from the latest page fairly quickly. As there are a lot of readers (based on feedback notes) that don't go much beyond that posting so much at once doesn't allow the story to attract as much attention or develop a following.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [3 Dec 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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