I really like this so far this is really well written and very interesting so I hope you decide to update it

Cool story but quite sad. Hope you update more soon

I really hope you come back to this story...it looks really good...I'd really like to read on! Please update it!

you're still working on the story, right?
this is the only Stargate-centered 'Willow's real family' story i can find and i think it's really good.
personally i think that Jack and Willow are very much alike. :)

it's SO unfair that there are no other stories like that :(

again, great story.

I promise you I'm still working on this story, I actually have about five draft chapters but they don't feel right to me so I haven't posted them yet but I'm hoping to have at least one chapter up by next week. Thanks for the review. :)

pleeeaaaasse update (:
i really like this fic!

interesting

Brilliant!
As for names, what about- Alexander Jonathan Charlie O'Neill. named after the baby's father, grandfather and uncle (Willow's brother)!

Really nice fic, I like how you've outlined everything and not made a complete bore of it. Just to let you know Willow's middle name is not Anne, It's Danielle and Xander's middle name is not Logan, it's LaVelle. It really bugs me when people say Willows middle name is Anne even though thats Buffy's and I don't think I've ever seen anyone get Xander's middle name wrong before. Apart from those and a few grammar error, it was some good writtin', can't wait for an update.

Danielle I always thought it was Anne I knew it was Buffy’s middle name I just assumed they had the same name. thanks for telling me I’ll fix it when I do the next update which will be soon so I promise I knew Xander’s middle name was LaVelle but he really doesn’t like it so I figured he would change it if he got the chance. I’ll explain that in one of the next chapters I was thinking of doing Willow and Xander’s wedding in a chapter but we’ll see how it goes. Thanks for the review though and I appreciate the tips. :)

Good chapter.

I agree with the previous poster. It's a decent story, but the severe lack of punctuation makes it nearly impossible to read.

Please remember, periods are your friend.

this story is kinda interesting however the run-on sentences make it a little hard to read. it will be interesting to see where you go with it.

Maybe she could name the baby after someone who has saved jack numerous times. sam, daniel, lil' teal'c

I was actually thinking that the name should be Alexander Giles O'Neill or Xander Giles O'Neill.

Hmmm...Alexander Jonathon O'Niell, or Alexander Jesse O'Neill as a name, maybe. You're doing really good with this. Keep up the good work.

can't wait