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Review of chapter "Void" from FireWolfe
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Any chance of a sequel?
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [3 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Void" from FireWolfe
Review:
Love to see a sequel.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [8 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Void" from Liliaeth
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When I was adding a new challenge, I happened to check on any old challenges I made and noticed one of them had actually had a response. :-)

It's fun to see a well written Spike meets CSI fic coming out of that one, simply adored the ending :-)
Review By [Liliaeth] • Date [1 Jun 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Void" from TwistedSlinky
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Great story! I really enjoyed it, even if a part of me wished there was more. You wrapped it up well. Hope Dawnie doesn't get herself fired :)
Review By [TwistedSlinky] • Date [6 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Void" from immortalwizardelffan
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LOL! i'm guessing one of the reasons Spike was in good ole Las Vegas was to check on his 'nibblet' for big sis, and himself. Very interesting. I liked it, I would lik to see a sequel where Grissom asks where Dawn knew Spike from.
Review By [immortalwizardelffan] • Date [18 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Void" from lyc
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Not a xover I was expecting, but I liked it.
Review By [lyc] • Date [26 Jan 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Void" from PhoenixRae
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Wow... this is DEFINITELY worth the read! I loved how you tackled the whole Spike getting caught bit and the whole interrogation. Typical CSI episode scenario here where the evidence befuddles the CSIs and without giving too much detail, the scenario was explained. Nice tie-up in the end.
Review By [PhoenixRae] • Date [19 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Void" from Christy
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very cool.
Review By [Christy] • Date [30 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Void" from CedarPineSpruce
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This was excellent! Dialogue, setting, I could just imagine myself there. The last line about Dawn was perfect. I look forward to reading what you write next. :-)
Comments from author:
Thank you very much!
Review By [CedarPineSpruce] • Date [14 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Circumstantial" from AnnOfMidnight
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Spike is pretty emotional but I doubt he would lose his temper unless someone he loves is on the line, or he's going to die...

Edited to answer question: it's at the bottom of chapter 3.

Edited for the last time: Ah, man. I said the story was interesting, I say I *loved* the ending with these starry thingies. This is not bad feedback. I gave you 9/10. I was just trying to say something more constructive than 'yay, keep it up'. I didn't mean to make you feel bad but it was the ending of the chapter, the last thing I read. I just said it in case you hadn't thought of it. It could have gone either way, and I don't know you; we don't know each other at all, even though I suspect we'd actually get along. And I know what frustration means (from your first edit of your answer) even though English isn't my first language, I'm feeling it right now. I'm probably frustrating you more by saying it, come to think of it but wow, I left a review, you asked a question, I answered, and then you were (insert appropriate word here; maybe offended?). Next time I'll wait till the end of your fic to give you the thumbs up (because, like I already said, you write good fic) so I'm not tempted to jump in with some one line character study you don't need to hear.

See you around, keep posting

Annie
Comments from author:
I don't remember writing about him losing his temper?

Edited to answer question: I used the word temper. I didn't say no one lost their temper. You like to read the back of the book, don't you?

I hate it when people try to read the back of the book.
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [14 Dec 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Void" from schulyr
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Awesome fic very well done, I think you got all of the characters down perfect
Comments from author:
Thank you very much! Finally, all that TV watching has paid off!
Review By [schulyr] • Date [14 Dec 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Void" from NumberFive
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Great story, too short!!!
Comments from author:
Thank you, too bad!!! It's finished.
Review By [NumberFive] • Date [14 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Void" from mithrilandtj
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I like it. Good job. :-)
Comments from author:
Thank you very much!
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [13 Dec 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Void" from DeeRose
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So that was really cute. Nice story. And I liked the ending with telling Dawn to call home. My only problem is when Spike was in the interrogation room he would have been looking into a mirror. Brass and Grissiom should have caught the whole 'no reflection' thing.
Comments from author:
CSI:LV interrogation rooms don't have mirrors. Which is how Spike saw Dawn in the first place.
Review By [DeeRose] • Date [13 Dec 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Void" from AnnOfMidnight
Review:
Woo-hoo! Great ending. *love*
Comments from author:
Thank you! *loves you back for the feedback*
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [13 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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