gotta love that last line.

Really enjoying this, and looking forward to reading the rest when I have more time. I'm particulary enjoying your way of getting around that very problematic idea of Fred's soul having been consumed/destroyed by Illyria's birth.

Hilarious! I love it!

This new chapter was great! I cheered Smurfette and cursed the Ancients for her. Rodney is always good for a laugh. Please continue.

Great stuff. Hope to read more soon.

Keep it going, each episode only gets better, and better!

Very cool. So now that Illyria has a soul can she leave atlantis, or is she stuck in the city?
Loved the ending line by the way.

Will Rodney at least get slapped? :-)

Love it!

Wispr

So, Illyria and Rodney... looks like the beginning of true love ;).
And the Ancients, kinda sneaky dudes the lot of them, I kinda like them =)
See ya!!

Good stuff.

Ve"ry good, though i am always hoping for an illyria/Willow pairing. Of course, given the two worlds do not belong to the same persons anymore, it is quite difficult.

Awesome :)

Off-world playground ;)

Well done.

Oh god, I can't wait for her to meet Ronan, whom I'm sure she will consider a pet, and Rodney!
Update soon please!

Interesting. Can an old one change? How many of them have been reborn into human shells? And of those how many would be in ongoing contact with the essence of that shell?

As there is nothing to compare this concept with, the idea that your Illyria is too human is not necessarily accurate. While some might think the personality would never change going from all powerful and giant sluggish to not quite so powerful, significantly smaller and non sluggish would tend to have some impact on the perspective.

So... let your imagination run free, and we'll sit back for the ride.