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Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Netchka
Review:
Can't wait for more chapters arrive. This is a very good story.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm hoping they arrive soonish!
Review By [Netchka] • Date [28 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from bradsan
Review:
Don't wait to long with updating. got this one on tracking
Comments from author:
I shall do my best.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [3 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Vickzie
Review:
Wicked story! I love how Daniel came to Buffy. Please update asap
Comments from author:
Thank you! I actually brought this file up the other day and started editing it. Inspiration hit and the beginning of a Graham and Buffy conversation started so hopefully the muse sticks with it.
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [27 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from LetsRandom
Review:
I really really enjoyed this story so far an I hope you continue it eventually.
Comments from author:
Thank you for reviewing and it will be continued... eventually.
Review By [LetsRandom] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Romanak
Review:
I'm really enjoying this story - I always felt for Jonas, and of course Daniel was badly missed while he was gone. Please update!
Comments from author:
Glad you like it and there will be more. I just have to get my muse interested in Stargate again. I have plans for a weekend marathon of season six soon. :) Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [Romanak] • Date [18 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
Polgara was kind enough to point me to this story when I mentioned how sad I was that no one had written any fan fiction about Ayiana. Though this isn't exactly what I was looking for, I think the way you sent Buffy back in time to become Ayiana and what you've done with this story is absolutely [i]brilliant![/i]

I'm very sorry to see that the plot bunny appears to have hopped away and left you stranded in the middle of this story, but I hope it hops back eventually, because I would dearly love to read the rest of this. Thank you for sharing it!
Comments from author:
Ayiana was a very interesting character and I liked how she was Jonas' first real friend. I'm glad you enjoyed it, but I can't take all the credit because I was answering a challenge with this story.

It hasn't completely vanished. Your review prompted me to start the Graham/General Hammond scene that had been nagging me for the last few weeks and I'm happy to say I have officially started this particular story back up and figured out a good place to end it. :) Thank you for reviewing, it helped this story and my muse greatly!
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [7 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from (Current Donor)Blackswordzero
Review:
I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Review By [(Current Donor)Blackswordzero] • Date [14 Oct 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Dapsy
Review:
This is a second(after Beyond Hope) story of yours that I read... amazing, both of them. I can say that if other stories of yours are anything like this one I will like them all. Well, back to reading... I think after supper I will start on a third story written by you... your writing is addicting ^_^
Comments from author:
Wow! Thank you! I'm still rather proud of how this particular story is shaping out so it's nice to hear that people like. Thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [Dapsy] • Date [3 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from spacey
Review:
this is awesome. i have questions; o'neill questions and how buffy will effect things, and about what daniel did to/with her. then, it seems this is abandoned so no need to pester you, right? just let you know i read your work
Comments from author:
Thank you. Though this story isn't abandoned.
Review By [spacey] • Date [30 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
*blinks* How in the world did I miss this update?! I really like this idea, its very unique and well thought out. Will buffy be using her slayer powers more? If the slayer essence saved buffy from dieing, would it have other effects?
Comments from author:
I'm not sure how you missed it. Maybe I updated behind your back? ;) Thank you! Her physical abilities won't play a huge role in this particular story because I just don't see how a Slayer's semi-enhanced strength and reflexes would help against the goa'uld, but her Ancient knowledge would.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [12 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Specks
Review:
Dude, I can't believe I've missed all your sg1 updates until now. Just noticed you were no longer on my tracked list with your recent posts. As always, loved the interactions. My favorite was Tealc's line where he says he believes SG1 as good is an accurate description. Awesome. I'm off to go read what else I've missed the past couple of months now. :)
Comments from author:
LOL There have been few SG-1 fics from me as of late because SPN has definitely snagged the muse. Though thanks for noticing the Teal'c moment and thinking it sounds like him. He's the hardest character-voice for me to pin-down. Thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [Specks] • Date [3 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from FireWolfe
Review:
Great piece I look forward to more. I like the idea of the ice woman living that always irked me about SG.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [16 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Cristina
Review:
oh yey Graham ...he was one of my favorites I liked him better than Riley, and kind of wished that he was with Buffy.
Review By [Cristina] • Date [11 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from (Recent Donor)Mari
Review:
oh--having Graham there was such a nice touch. A bit of home, without home. I also have to admire your little dialogue touches, like "answering in cryptic", which make it seem much more Buffish.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Mari] • Date [20 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
I love that, and her knowing Graham should get their attention. Lucy you have some splaining to do. LOL

I am really looking forward to the next chapter.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [18 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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