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Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Six" from Keshkreature
Review:
This was really neat! I didn't even realize that there was a Fruits Basket category on here until today. I loved how you managed to keep things true to Fruits Basket's heart so much. Thanks for the fun read!
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [29 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Six" from markw
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Rune worries me. He rants about how an anime character, who isn't really a villian anyway, should suffer at the hands of characters from another series from another country.
Review By [markw] • Date [26 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Six" from naplam
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My knowledge of Fruits Basket is limited, but-this is based on the anime, right? Well, Kureno is from the manga. So it's mixing the two versions up.
Review By [naplam] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Six" from Rune
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Akito needs to be cursed by Willow. Beaten black and blue by Xander, and learn what fear is from Buffy.
Review By [Rune] • Date [12 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Six" from calikocat
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Omigod! Dawn got run down by Tuxedo Mask! XD

Loved all of your fic, very unique and I loved how you ended the curse.
Review By [calikocat] • Date [11 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Six" from Vld
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Damn, i keep forgetting this is a Fruits Basket crossover! Even though i spent half the time remembering who was who!
Of course there wouldn't be physical retaliation! Here i was hoping for Buffy to throw Akito around a little! Or maybe reveal her secret? Or both at the same time?

But it wouldn't be Fruits Basket if things got really violent... oh well, this was still pretty good, and a lot closer to the original than what i would come up with had i tried. There would have been lots of violence and swearing.

And damn, but Chiba was here... at least he wasn't in his Tuxed form! Which is a small blessing.
Review By [Vld] • Date [15 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from Vld
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Oh yeah. Wise move. Erase the memory of the sister to the most powerful Slayer in history, who's surrogate father leads the Council, and i'm not even mentioning her other surrogates. That stupid chick Akito is calling for death!
Review By [Vld] • Date [14 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Vld
Review:
So, Mizuno is Ami's mom from Sailormoon i guess? I don't remember her from Fruits Basket... okay, actually i don't remember most characters of FB, even though i have the show and read all the mangas, but... can i hope for the participations of an insane cat, a cold mouse and a... jealous hyperacting boar? Even better would be Tohru's two best friends. One former delinquent, and a girl who would give nightmares to Sadako can only be a great help against demons.
Comments from author:
Yup that's Ami's mum. I haven't written for a while, but I will again, soon. I've just had A LOT on my plate.
Review By [Vld] • Date [14 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Six" from TsukiNamida
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Wow! I just discovered this precious jewel today and I zapped right though it! I love it! Though I do wish there were more, end was so sudden and all. And I wish I could've seen the meeting between Dawn and Akito, or Takito as my friend and I like to call him, but overall I love it!
Review By [TsukiNamida] • Date [5 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Six" from Obsidian
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BRAVO I love it!!

I haven't watched the anime but after this I might. Thanks.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [2 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Six" from TaleWeaver
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The end? *blinks* huh. Is it just me, or was that kinda sudden? Maybe I'm too used to constantly reading chapters of your lovely story?
I still don't think Buffy got yelled at enough, but the Summers family bonding was *love*. That was a very simple, but GREAT idea for breaking the curse - well done. Believable, mythologically sound, and in character for Momiji to do it.
Great opener, with Kyo there, and nothing happening. But I'm not sure he'll ever really trust Buffy or Willow - ever. No matter how much he becomes friends with his future wife's bridesmaid (Dawn, that is. 'Cause you know they will get married. And Dawn will so be a bridesmaid, along with Uo and Hana and all the female zodiacs). Loved the little shippy touches. (squee!)
Loved the Scooby family's dark mutterings over what they'd like to do to Akito. Very nice touch that Xander's the one to react to Yuki's comment 'this is the sort of thing he usually does to us'.
You said at Manifest that you'd already had a couple of suggestions for one-shot sequels? Can I take one of Willow and Buffy getting reamed by Giles, a proper date for Momiji and Dawn, and I'd like to know exactly what the Scoobs have in mind for Akito. (this version? I don't feel sorry for AT ALL) I'd also like some Buffy/Dawn/Tohru bonding over losing their mother - I know you said you were uncomfortable delving too deeply into this, but if you're ever at a place where you think you could, I'd like to see it. Or even a Dawn/Kyo scene, where he's wondering over telling Tohru about his previous friendship with Kyoko? Also, a look at Dawn's matchmaking abilities, where Tohru and Kyo are concerned! And I'd like to see Willow and Hana's first meeting - maybe with a Megumi cameo? *piteous look*
Comments from author:
Well, I'm glad you liked it. I know Buffy didn't really get yelled at a whole lot, but you have to remember that Dawn's still pretty injured. Plus, it's not really Tohru's thing to yell at people. I can so see the way Buffy reacted happening, though, she reminds me a bit of a slightly more violent version of myself sometimes, y'know, outcast, short...lol. And when I fight with my sisters it often ends like that ^^.

I'm so happy that you liked my way of breaking the curse. I'm still not 100% sure why it broke in the series, lol, so I thought I'd do my best to find my own reason.

If you take a look, the first story in the offshoots is up now...it alludes to Willow and Saki's first meeting, even if it's not actually about it...I will write the meeting, if I find myself so inspired.

I promise you though, that there will be more in this series, because I love writing it. I have a whole bunch of ideas planned out, about 20 in all, which will be set in 5 different stories, lol. So there'll be a lot going on. Please tell me what you think!
Review By [TaleWeaver] • Date [18 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Six" from KatieKat
Review:
ohhh that was really freaking good I want more lol I say kudo's to you it was a great story. *smiles*
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm so glad you liked it.

If you take a look, the first story in the offshoots is up now...it alludes to Willow and Saki's first meeting, even if it's not actually about it...I will write the meeting, if I find myself so inspired.

I promise you though, that there will be more in this series, because I love writing it. I have a whole bunch of ideas planned out, about 20 in all, which will be set in 5 different stories, lol. So there'll be a lot going on. Please tell me what you think!
Review By [KatieKat] • Date [14 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Six" from magik
Review:
Whoa, what a nice ride! Thank you!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it, you're quite welcome ^^.

If you take a look, the first story in the offshoots is up now...it alludes to Willow and Saki's first meeting, even if it's not actually about it...I will write the meeting, if I find myself so inspired.

I promise you though, that there will be more in this series, because I love writing it. I have a whole bunch of ideas planned out, about 20 in all, which will be set in 5 different stories, lol. So there'll be a lot going on. Please tell me what you think!
Review By [magik] • Date [13 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Six" from link
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The end? The end?!!!NO!!!! But I guess it has to end, the Sohmas free of the curse and all. I like your take on the curse and the way it could be broken. Would you do ficlet though, like the Kureno and Arisa date or how Dawn introduce Momiji to Giles. It can also be about Kyo/Tohru and Kyo's feeling when he's not bound by the curse anymore. Anyway, I enjoyed every chapter you had written and thank you so much for sharing your story.
Comments from author:
Sorry...it's the end, lol. I'm glad you liked it.

If you take a look, the first story in the offshoots is up now...it alludes to Willow and Saki's first meeting, even if it's not actually about it...I will write the meeting, if I find myself so inspired.

I promise you though, that there will be more in this series, because I love writing it. I have a whole bunch of ideas planned out, about 20 in all, which will be set in 5 different stories, lol. So there'll be a lot going on. Please tell me what you think!
Review By [link] • Date [13 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Six" from darkmagician
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The End? Already? *pouts* I was enjoying this so much. I was so hoping that Willow would teach Akito a lesson, or we would at least get to see Dawn confront him again with her memories intact. At least it was a good ending. Kureno gets to be with Arisa, and Kyo with Tohru, and of course Dawnie and Momiji. Such a shame that it's over though. I did really enjoy this story and would love to see more of your work. I also hope you check out my stories when you have time.
Comments from author:
Lol, sorry it's the end. I'm glad you liked it. I'll certainly check out your stories.

If you take a look, the first story in the offshoots is up now...it alludes to Willow and Saki's first meeting, even if it's not actually about it...I will write the meeting, if I find myself so inspired.

I promise you though, that there will be more in this series, because I love writing it. I have a whole bunch of ideas planned out, about 20 in all, which will be set in 5 different stories, lol. So there'll be a lot going on. Please tell me what you think!
Review By [darkmagician] • Date [13 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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