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Review of chapter "Part 27: Realizations" from mendenbar
Review:
Don't know how many times I have come to this part, seen your "is anybody still reading this?" note and nearly sighed that there is still no more. After 4 years I don't suppose there is much hope for completion, but still, I gotta ask "Are you ever going to come back to this?" It is really much to good to just abandon, especially at this point.
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [2 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 27: Realizations" from mendenbar
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Yes, I am still here reading this. I have come back to it several times hoping for an update. Perhaps this hiatus has been long enough?
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [11 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 27: Realizations" from desartartt
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hi, I visit this story periodically and would like yo see the plot furthered.
Review By [desartartt] • Date [4 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 27: Realizations" from mendenbar
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YES! I am still reading this story. I keep coming back, hoping for an update, but it has been 2 years now and I am losing hope. Sigh. I think I will hope a little longer.
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [6 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 27: Realizations" from slasher
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Just found this story through Methos' fanart. I'm enjoying this a lot and hope you keep writing! I'm on tenterhooks now! The last post was over a year ago so I'm a bit worried.
Review By [slasher] • Date [18 Dec 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 27: Realizations" from AkashaDrake
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It would be good to read more. I only found this tonight.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far. As soon as I can get my muses to cooperate I'll get more of this story out. -TU
Review By [AkashaDrake] • Date [9 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 27: Realizations" from jawebb
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Hi -

I don't suppose there's any chance that defeating Illyria (& hopefully getting Cass back) will involve *having* to sacrifice Travers?

I really like your Doctor - & it's about time the gang was able to get medical help!

Keep up the good work.

Judy
Comments from author:
Hello back!

I know, Travers is beyond being a pain. Unfortunately, you'll have to deal with him for awhile yet. As for Cass/Ria, well, you'll have to read further in the story for an answer for that! I'm glad you liked Dr. Rubedo. His appearance in the story was a complete surprise to me, and you'll be pleased to know that he'll definitely be showing up in future stories. -TU
Review By [jawebb] • Date [18 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 27: Realizations" from vampygal
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I have to admit I haven't thought or seen this story in a few years. So read it and I like where your going. Your writing has definately improved over time.
Comments from author:
I thank you, and that is the best compliment I could ever hope to receive. I'm glad to see that my efforts to be a better writer have worked. -TU
Review By [vampygal] • Date [12 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 27: Realizations" from Harry
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*Shakes head in wonder* I think that Adam is going to have to do some serious soul searching before he makes a decision on whether to tell the Scooby Gang about Illyria. As for Travers, FEED HIM TO A VAMP or FEED HIM TO A SEWER MONSTER! That pain in the rear has GOT TO GO! And I love the new charachter. Definetly keep him around!
Comments from author:
*smirks* So glad you enjoyed it. Yeah, poor Methos is in for some serious pain! I agree about Travers, but I gotta have SOMEBODY to be the antagonist in that group until they're pitted against a certain Old One. I plan to keep Athanor guest-spotting in future stories, so he'll show up at some point. *grins* -TU
Review By [Harry] • Date [12 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 27: Realizations" from MistofRainbows
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yes yes, some of us are really reading. :)

Sort of interesting how the histories are nice and twisted together.
Comments from author:
hehehe! Of course they are. It wouldn't be one of my stories if they weren't. There's even more backstory that'll come out in the next few chapters that'll boggle the mind.

Thank you for your support. I appreciate it very much! -TU
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [12 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 27: Realizations" from jupitersdaughter
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Still reading. And this part was made of win!
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad you found it so enjoyable. -TU
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [12 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 26: The Crap Hits the Fan" from RevDorothyL
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I just found this story, and I do hope there will be more someday soon! I'm enjoying this alternate version much more than the original (which I read yesterday), with the greater complexity and detail you're putting into the story, not to mention the fascinating possibilities of having Cassandra become Illyria's unwilling landlady (rather than mere shell) and of Dawn and Methos apparently well on the way to forming a very interesting bond.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much! I am pleased that you are enjoying this as much as you are. I must agree with you about how complex it is, too. The original version looks like child's play compared to this one, I admit.

I'm not exactly sure when the next part will be coming out, as my Muses are not being very cooperative right now, unfortunately. Hopefully the deadlock will end soon, and I'll be able to post something. -TU
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [12 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 26: The Crap Hits the Fan" from Dragonelf
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YAY, new chapter.

By the way, you might wish to correct the spelling of Quentin Travers' first name in this chapter.


::Gives the plot bunny some Scooby Snacks::

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All great truths begin as blasphemies.
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Comments from author:
Glad you're happy with the part, and (blushes deeply) thanks for finding that mistake. Just did a Find and Replace on the whole story and came up with 52 replaces...GAH! I was just typing it like I always heard it sound, and didn't think to check if it was correct or not. Thank you. I'll make sure it's the right spelling from now on.

Thanks for the Scooby Snacks, as well! My poor Muses needed a pick-me-up after this last part. -TU
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [2 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 26: The Crap Hits the Fan" from Harry
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First off, WELCOME BACK! You have been missed! And your fans, (including myself, your beta {Who will NOT reveal anything}) have been waiting for your return. Now, onto the review.

Illyria/Cassandra make a DEVESTATING combo! These two will test the limiits of anyone they meet up with, be it vampire, demon, immortal, or even SLAYER! Dawn was tested to her limits, and she is just beginning to learn them. Tara had her shields ripped and shattered as if they were NOTHING! This is something to be VERY scared of.

As for that sleezebag Travers, well, you KNOW my feelings on that piece of garbage. You should have let DARK WILLLOW go loose and dispose of him once and for all!

Adam is going to have his problems with IllCandra. No doubts about that.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Yeah, I was most assuredly trying to show just how powerful CassRia is, and think I succeeded pretty darn well! As for Travers...(shrugs)...not much to say. -TU
Review By [Harry] • Date [1 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 26: The Crap Hits the Fan" from jupitersdaughter
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Awesome update! I love that Illyria listens to Cassandra every once in a while. Willow's reaction to Travers was made of win! And the meeting Dawn had with Illyria was beyond cool!
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad you found it so thrilling. -TU
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [1 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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