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Review of chapter "Chapter III" from Letomo
Review:
I really liked this story. It's nice to see Xander 'corrupting' Bester, even as Bester works to accomplish his goals. Also, with this power, how did the episode where Buffy gained Telepathy go? And, how much was Bester concerned by a demon that could make people Teeps, with no control, but all power? Wish you would continue it, it's a great look at the character of both Bester, and Xander.
Review By [Letomo] • Date [8 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter III" from omnimercurial
Review:
Ahh... Excellent work Tjin ^_^ Most enjoyable. Have you considered doing a Streetfighter x BTVS crossover? Your depiction of a Bester Xander has got me thinking about a M.Bison Xander replete with Psycho Power and a drive to Attaining Power. Maybe even a Xander Influenced Doll Recruitment & Development Programme? I wonder if he would stay in the USA long term or instead seek to take over a smaller Country to start with & found a Neo Shadowloo? What do you think?
Comments from author:
Considered it, not sure if i want to jump on that proverbial land mine at that moment though, given how my work schedule has keps me from writing on the stories i already have.
Review By [omnimercurial] • Date [5 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter III" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Huh, wrong on so many levels. Yup, can see Bester pulling it off.
Comments from author:
glad you liked it.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [25 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter III" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Comments from author:
thanks
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [24 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter III" from cwolf
Review:
I'd class him as more a grey area bad guy. I think he did a few legitimate good deeds in the show.

But then, Molari who tended toward the bad side of deeds did a few good ones. Same with G'Kar who tended to do good ones but for his own good as well as some bad ones. And yet did a couple of legitimate good ones without expecting any reward at all.
Review By [cwolf] • Date [24 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter III" from Gideon
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Scary! I was glad to see the old Alexander still exerting some influence on the new one. I just hope it is enough to steer him away from true evil. I was a bit surprised that 14 people dropped in to the library though. Was it bring your child to the library day or something? I think the number of non-scoobies we saw in the library over the course of the whole series could be counted on one hand :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [24 Mar 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter III" from Runewolf
Review:
This chapter sent a cold shiver down my spine. I'm really curious as to how this will develop.
Review By [Runewolf] • Date [24 Mar 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter III" from BlueRonin
Review:
I love to hate Bester! He's one of those amazing villains that just steal the show from the heroes.
Good story.
Review By [BlueRonin] • Date [24 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter III" from Duquette
Review:
This is wonderful, one of the flat out best Halloween set ups I've ever seen.
Review By [Duquette] • Date [24 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter III" from MagnusXXN
Review:
Because of you and this lil fic I'm currently downloading Babylon 5. Just to see who your talking about. Good job.


): )
Review By [MagnusXXN] • Date [24 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter III" from KrisB
Review:
I love this one. Actually, knowing Xander has included Willow and Buffy in his mental pack, he might expand his PSI-Corp mandate to include witches and potential slayers as well. He might also look into taking over the watchers council.

After Xander learns that true seers exist in that reality, one of his recruiting goals should be to find as many of them as possible. Seers may see Xander as a safe bet. WRH and WC may lead to quick deaths to various seers while watching the future of the PSI corp shows that their fellow seers are alive-well treated and doing good work. That would influence most of the smarter ones to try to make it to them for protection at the least.

Xander will have to hire anti-demon protection for his group. Some one mentioned what his reaction to Buffy and the telepathic slime. I think everyone would agree that he'd end up loving it. Buffy would be rated and taught control. She might find no reason to try getting rid of it. Xander would than think about experimenting with it.

I'm actually curious on the Dawn thing and who he'd end up with. Faith wouldn't go bad in this one. He'd easily notice that she is running/fleeing and hiding herself in a persona. He might not love her, but he'd certainly help her out far more than the original Xander did.

This Xander will think of the PSI-Corp, the Scoobies, and Slayers in general as all under his protection. Interesting times if you develop it.
Review By [KrisB] • Date [23 Mar 13] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter III" from CPTSkip
Review:
Excellent continuation. Bester was one of those guys who, no matter what evil they did, always saw himself as a hero. Glad to see Alexander Bester is the same way. Not to say he is doing evil. I wonder how he will handle Buffy when she is hit with the demonic telepathic slime?
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [23 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter III" from Studyofchaos
Review:
Good story. A longer more fleshed out story based on this would be great.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [23 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter III" from Tjack
Review:
Wow, a blast from the past. Is this just one chapter and out, or do you have a cunning plan?
Be seeing you.
Review By [Tjack] • Date [23 Mar 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter III" from Greywizard
Review:
It's always a delight to see another of your stories show up, my friend, and this is definitely one of your better ones. ;-)

Alexander Bester would be a nightmare incarnate as far as Angel and the demon community is concerned, for the reasons shown in chapters two and three, and that is undoubtedly just skimming the surface of the potential he embodies.

I'd love to see more of this, or any of your other stories! ;-)

Thanks for sharing!
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [23 Mar 13] • Not Rated
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