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Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from (Current Donor)Listener
Review:
I enjoyed the story. The Angel/Lindsey ship was a little groan-worthy, but I think you were playing it more as comic relief (in which case, it worked). If there was anything I didn't like about the story, it's that it happened so fast. There weren't any real obstacles or multi-act plot arcs to make things difficult for our heroes. I'd love to have seen this stretched to 20-25 chapters and gotten more in-depth with the characters, motivations, and plot.

I also really liked the ending explanation of the Slayer School. Never thought of using that one myself.
Comments from author:
I'm so glad you enjoyed the story, despite it not being longer. I'm not a long-fic writer. I've only written longer than 7-8 chapters 2 or 3 times.
Review By [(Current Donor)Listener] • Date [15 Apr 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Delightful relationship between Willow and Charlie!!
Comments from author:
Thank you! I adore these two together.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [30 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from serenityselena
Review:
interesting plot ^__^
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [2 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from winnie
Review:
good story
liked the characters new and old
glad to see have some fun
Comments from author:
Thank you! This was my first crossover between the shows and I had a lot of fun writing it.
Review By [winnie] • Date [30 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Most pleasant reading I've had in quite some time. Though, maybe, a bit sappy? Hey, it works!!
Comments from author:
I'm so glad that you enjoyed this story. I am a fluffy writer and proud of it. :)
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [28 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from spring
Review:
This is wonderful I love it.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much!
Review By [spring] • Date [26 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Snowpuppies
Review:
I found you! Yay!

And this was lovely - I adore how you blend these two fandoms together. Numb3rs is one of my fave shows, even if I've not "officially" cracked the fanfic barrier as of yet, and you really get the "feel" of the show right.

I thought it was a wonderful, enjoyable read. :)
Comments from author:
I love Numb3rs too, obviously. I haven't written solely in that fandom, but I'm really enjoying crossing it with BtVS. Especially Charlie with Willow. I'm so glad that you enjoyed this!

Thanks for finding me.
Review By [Snowpuppies] • Date [6 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Obsidian
Review:
Great story. You nailed it on the characters and how they would interact. Very nice. Thanks
Comments from author:
I'm so glad you thought so. I had so much fun blending these two shows, especially since it was my first time writing Numb3rs.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [22 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from (Past Donor)renatria
Review:
oh that so sweet
Comments from author:
Thank you so much!
Review By [(Past Donor)renatria] • Date [18 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Great final line from Charlie! And you managed to allay just enough of Don's curiosity and suspicions to allow for the possibility of relatively smooth family relations with Willow in future. Nice!
Comments from author:
Thank you! I figured that Don needed to be told something that would appease him since Willow hoped to be in Charlie's life for a while, which would mean dealing with his brother too. Given time, he'll probably learn the truth, and then wish he hadn't.

Thank you for all of your support throughout this story!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [24 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Christy
Review:
I loved it...very nicely done. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you. And thanks for your support throughout this fic.
Review By [Christy] • Date [21 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from KarlStahl
Review:
Very good story. Nice idea, and your pairing of Willow and Charlie was well done. I am surprised at the quick ending. Charlie's brother Don will surely still have a lot of questions. You didn't answer the question why the girls were kidnapped or what happened to the guards inside the house or why Wolfram & Hart tried it at all? Will there be another story answering at least some of these questions?

It was fun to read. Thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
I'm glad that you enjoyed the overall story.

Why Wolfram & Hart kidnapped the girls wasn't important to the overall story. I knew that it was because they wanted to train the new slayers to work for them before the girls knew how to use their powers the way they were born to, but since their plan was never going to be able to be put into effect, I didn't feel the need to go into it.
Review By [KarlStahl] • Date [21 Jan 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from HunterH
Review:
this was a very cute story thanks for sharing it i loved reading it.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it.
Review By [HunterH] • Date [21 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
Nice ending. I loved the way you tied it all up with a big old bow (figuratively), I only have one question--will there be more? It would be nice to see the interactions between Willow and Charlie's dad...
Comments from author:
Thank you. No plans at the moment to continue this storyline, but I have some other plot bunnies for crossovers with this pairing. Thanks for all your support throughout this fic.
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [21 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
Nicely done and I can't wait for the next chapter
Comments from author:
Thank you. Only one more to go.
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [17 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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