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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WinterRayne
Review:
very funny.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it. It was fun to write.
Review By [WinterRayne] • Date [18 Dec 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ddraig
Review:
Lol! This made me chuckle. :) I could just imagine the faces of Buffy and Spike, as well as the innocence of Dawn!

One very minor nitpick - the tense is wrong in the last sentence I think - it should be "needed" instead of "needs".
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the nit-picking. I'm not sure if I agree about the tense being wrong since they are talking about a future event. It could probaly go either way. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [Ddraig] • Date [18 Dec 06] • Not Rated
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