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Review of chapter "Day, The Second" from KatieKat
Review:
lol oh god please update I would love to see more of this story
Review By [KatieKat] • Date [27 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Day, The Second" from banner
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What an amazing concept!
I hope your muse leads you back here - there's so much you can do with this idea.
Review By [banner] • Date [16 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Day, The Second" from Scrappychic
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Any chance in this being continued. It's very enjoyable so far.
I'd love to see more.
Review By [Scrappychic] • Date [6 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Day, The Second" from Dragonelf
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I hope you will inspired to continue this story soon so that we will not be left hanging.

::Feeds the plot bunny::
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [13 Sep 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Day, The Second" from AnnOfMidnight
Review:
My interest is totally peaked. What is it they have to do? I'll tune in to find out.
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [4 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Day, The Second" from manic
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Very amusing and entertaining! Dawn and Harry should be very good friends in a very short amount of time ;)
Review By [manic] • Date [2 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Day, The Second" from chajalive
Review:
This has potential, go on writing, then I will go on reading.
chaja
Review By [chajalive] • Date [1 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Day, The Second" from Emeraldfire
Review:
cool! Now why is Harry the only one reliving the first day along with Dawn? Hummm sounds interesting...
Review By [Emeraldfire] • Date [1 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Day, The Second" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Excellent
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [1 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Day, The Second" from WinterRayne
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Great !!!
Review By [WinterRayne] • Date [31 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Day, The Second" from mithrilandtj
Review:
And when is the Groundhog Day effect going to be broken?
Comments from author:
At the end of the story with probably an epilogue afterward.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [31 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Day, The Second" from link
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What amused me is that Dawn keep landing on Harry. Harry's gonna have some bruises. The way Dawn can answer Hermione's question will make her looks like she use mind reading isn't it. Keep on writing. It's interesting to find out what happen to Dawn.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [link] • Date [31 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Day, The Second" from Lin
Review:
Why does harry remember too? i bet the introductory class starts to get boring, having essentially the same class over and over with only a slight difference.
The chapters are pretty short, but i suppose i can't really complain. I would like to see more interaction with other characters, how does dawn react to her coworkers, especially since she is living the same day over and over, it could be confusing. I can't see some of the staff respecting her because she is so young and dumbledore does have a bad track record of DADA teachers.
Actually, you have said that she is a guest lecturer, who is the main teacher.
You have a really good idea, if you took the time to flesh out the story it can be fantastic.
Comments from author:
Harry remembers for two reasons the first is basically magical contamination and second because he is an important plot device. I'm sure Dawn will get bored of teaching the same class every day but the class will only really feature in probably one more chapter except for fun(possible crack-type) scenes. I'm planning on more character interaction in chapters to come.

Thank you for taking the time to leave a detailed review with constructive criticism!
Review By [Lin] • Date [31 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Day, The Second" from (Past Donor)halfbloodpuffskin
Review:
mmm, groundhogs day. Love that, and this, story!

eager for more!
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.
Review By [(Past Donor)halfbloodpuffskin] • Date [31 Aug 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Day, the First" from willayork
Review:
hmmm, well i like it so far, but i think i'll hold any real comments until i figure out more of what's going on here. there will be more right? soon?
Review By [willayork] • Date [28 Apr 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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