Love this fic, from the mess in the kitchen to Dawn unknowingly reflecting Anita's feelings to the humour about the bubbles. Thank you for writing this.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [17 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review By [leelaa] • Date [22 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Things We Wanted" from BlameyFomorrii
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Why is the coconut only for Thursdays?
Sweet little scene. I like the idea that it isn't all Dawn's fear about an abandoning father-figure impacting how she feels about Micah's place and permanence in her life.
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [27 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Which is of course code for 'I love you'. Dawn's read enough, wonder if she picked it up. I love your little glimpses into Dawn's new life and how despite the fact that she is a toddler you still make her teenage tendencies mesh.
Review By [feekh] • Date [20 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Things We Wanted" from Darksidhe
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I love this series. I had to go back and read everything over again. Looking forward to more.
Review By [Darksidhe] • Date [19 Dec 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Things We Wanted" from mithrilandtj
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That's so cute.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [19 Dec 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Dawn is sometimes a five year old and sometimes a teenager, well duh! It is also true that she has always had abandonment issues. You have her personality so nailed!!! I love this story even the left out episodes that show up later. :)
Review By [Arjai] • Date [19 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
