Awesome. I haven't read the Alanna books in so long, but I still love them, I can't wait to see how you write George, he was always my favourite. Please update soon.
Review By [spikeismine] • Date [8 Jan 08] • Not Rated
I just read chapters three -n- four and while I am enjoying this story I am interested in the characterizations on the tortalans. Would the Lioness really feel threatened by the Slayer when she has talked to gods and knows a demi-god (Dain Sarah's daughter).
Review By [tammin] • Date [10 Sep 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
er.... I have to say your Buffy strikes me as ridiculously talkative. Not in the chatty sense but in the spilling everything she knows to anyone who asks sense. The fact that she actually told them about Dawn being the key is the biggest tip off... that and that she's the slayer... and, well, to be honest almost everything you have her telling them from the first chapter and this one I have a hard time believing.
And didn't she leave that sword stuck in Acathla? I'm pretty sure that pulling it out would wake Acathla back up and, well, end the world. Just like last time.
Comments from author:
okay to clear it up. There were two swords. and i don't really care. if they get switched evilenss. 2nd what buffy said, she was under a truth spell of sorts. Evil Numair. So she really didn't have a choice. She was pretty horrorfied. Even when she told them seh was a slayer, Numair was had just started the spell. hope that helps
Review By [Locathah] • Date [10 Sep 07] • Not Rated
YAY! An update, an update *dances around singing* I love the Tortall books and I love that you are doing a crossover with them. And I especially love that you updated. Good work. I look forward to more.
Review By [SassyFrass] • Date [16 Jul 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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