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Review of chapter "Dawning Light: Check Mate" from Taryn
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More of this please. Either Jean oand Dawn or someone starting to believe Dawn.
Review By [Taryn] • Date [21 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dawning Light: Check Mate" from leelaa
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"It looks like a mime exploded in here," Dawn said suddenly. "Well, not a real mime, because then everything would be red and gooey, but like a fake mime. Mime-lite."
(Jean-Claude:) "Indeed, little one, the room is very black and white."
~
Dawn's eyes popped open as she looked around the room. "Did a mime explode in here?" she demanded, twisting around to look at Jean-Claude.
"No, little one, a mime did not explode in here." The black and white walls directed attention to the brilliant crimson of the bed, but it was not as bad as Dawn was making it out to be. "Anita once suggested that I add some color to my decorating."
(Anita:) "And I haven't made a single suggestion since."
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LOL. I love the whole 'Dawning Light' series, but maybe 'Checkmate' the most of all. Thank you for writing it. Waiting patiently for whensoever you decide to continue the series.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [16 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dawning Light: Check Mate" from leelaa
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(Anita:) "Wait, who do you mean by 'us'?"
Jean-Claude raised an eyebrow as little Dawn rolled her eyes at Anita's delayed reaction. How very... adult. "He means he's going to feed me to the lamia in the side-show upstairs when you're gone, Anita," Dawn said.
"Hey!" Anita shot Jean-Claude a glare. "That-- Oh, hey. Hey!"
Dawn shook her head. "She left her sense of humor in the car."
~
LOL.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [5 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dawning Light: Check Mate" from leelaa
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This story, and the entire series...FANTASTIC.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [22 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dawning Light: Check Mate" from yakuit
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out of all the stories in the series this is my absolute favourite I think
Review By [yakuit] • Date [29 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dawning Light: Check Mate" from BlameyFomorrii
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"You believe the fantastical tale of this child?"

Jean-Claude looked at the chess board, at the black queen lying on its side next to the white queen. "It would seem that I do."

---Of course! *Love that Dawn won!*

Oh, angry that no one ever wants to believe Dawn when she finally tells them the truth. At least Jean-Claude is more open. I mean, just look at Dawn, listen to her and you'll know she isn't just some smart 5 year old.

I like these missing scenes-the different POV's help expand the story and understand what everyone else is really feeling and thinking about Dawn.
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [25 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dawning Light: Check Mate" from purrfus
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I laughed a lot, and I shivered some too.

Dawn was great, the swan/water/ducklings was so cute. I would very much like to see more interaction between Dawn and the vampires.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [5 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dawning Light: Check Mate" from SlyLychee
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This is my favorite Dawning Light Interlude so far. I love the interaction between JC and Dawn. And I'll have to say that the "puking swan" was priceless! I'm going to giggle every time I see a swan now.
Review By [SlyLychee] • Date [29 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dawning Light: Check Mate" from CJNyfalt
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Excellent as always, but I would prefer that you kept the story more together in one thread.
Review By [CJNyfalt] • Date [26 Dec 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dawning Light: Check Mate" from skychan
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This is an excelent addition to the story. I like how it helps to flesh out some of the othwerwise behind the scene's information on whats happening in the world as well as giving us an 'outsiders' view of Dawn.
Review By [skychan] • Date [26 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dawning Light: Check Mate" from Trace
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I've pretty much been giggling hysterically for this entire chapter, though I was a little confused about Dawn's reaction to the painting of Jean-Claude, Asher, and Julianna. But, I may have overlooked something in an earlier chapter.

I love your characterizations-perfectly spot-on, to the last detail. Very nice, considering how hard it is to meld characters from two universes and stay true to each character's quirks.

Loving it, and can't wait to see where you go from here!
Review By [Trace] • Date [25 Dec 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dawning Light: Check Mate" from Calex
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This was... incredible. I do so adore your Jean Claude, so much. I love how he's the only one to consider the fact that Dawn isn't all she seems, love Anita's protectiveness and instant mode of denial over Dawn. Everything was just so lovely and well done. Beautiful work as usual. I'm really looking forward to seeing them all find out about Dawn's status as a teenager, and what they'll do. And also, is it as Dawn fears? Have the Scooby gang forgotten her? Lots of questions about the actual WIP, but this was just brilliant work.
Review By [Calex] • Date [25 Dec 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawning Light: Check Mate" from SilverWave
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Fantastic - thanks :)
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [24 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dawning Light: Check Mate" from (Current Donor)romero
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This was a very enjoyable read. I was impressed with Jean-Claude's observations about Dawn and how he interacted with her. It's nice to see Anita so caring and maternal towards Dawn.
Review By [(Current Donor)romero] • Date [24 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dawning Light: Check Mate" from mokahi
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Loved it! So many great details bring the characters and the story to life. After Dawn's reaction to the painting, I'm looking forward to Asher and Dawn's first encounter.
Review By [mokahi] • Date [24 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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