Review of chapter "Part Four" from Willimer
Great story, i love Buffy/Ronon and you portrayed them both perfectly
Review By [Willimer
] • Date [16 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Four" from Selonianth
Not bad. My way would have been very different, but I like it.
Review By [Selonianth
] • Date [14 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Four" from breve
I was never a big Ronon fan, but love how you've written him here.
Review By [breve
] • Date [23 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Four" from Goddessa
Comments from author:
Wow, those are lovely. I love the dark background and the pics you chose. Thank you very much!
Review By [Goddessa
] • Date [16 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Four" from bradsan
this is a story which had everything in it. just enough, not to long and not to short. good job
Review By [bradsan
] • Date [6 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Four" from Vickzie
Aww that's so cute. It's a shame the story only lasted 4 chapters.
Review By [Vickzie
] • Date [11 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Four" from naraic
I read this today, it came up the recced fics on the homepage and thought it was quality, good job
Review By [naraic
] • Date [20 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Four" from thewrongalice
Great story - I know it's been ages since you wrote it & it's complete and everything, but more would be fantastic. Ronon is just so ... Ronon.
Review By [thewrongalice
] • Date [10 Sep 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Four" from BrownFinderth
Tremendous story!!! Even though it involved dimension hopping, I enjoyed reading it, as I thought Buffy's powers involving the ancients was awesome!
Review By [BrownFinderth
] • Date [21 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Four" from zephyrRS
Wow. I think I only ever read part of this tale. It is absolutely marvelous!
Review By [zephyrRS
] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Four" from mimijikazananyi
Too brilliant. ^_^
Review By [mimijikazananyi
] • Date [6 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Four" from SlaygrlIca
I love it and wish it was longer but it amazing.
Review By [SlaygrlIca
] • Date [1 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Four" from lucyferr
“I am Ancient. I am what this ship is built upon. I am a slave. I am an image to make you see. I am a prisoner forced to serve my enemy. I am one of many, a sister to your home.”
Buffy discharged herself less than twenty four hours later, bribing Ronon into kidnapping her from the infirmary in the middle of the night.
bribing him with what? :-)
The bodies of the Queen and her guards were raided by Beckett before they were burned. A nurse commented that even the enemy deserved some respect. Carson offered to send her back to Earth with the Daedalus immediately and never come back.
Elisabeth Summers is married to one Riley Finn. He has a lot of affairs and generally treats her like shit.
ouch - though how did he meet her?
"I wanted this to be my world, just a bit. To see them again. But on the other hand I’m glad. I’m not the girl they used to know and I don’t think they could understand me now. I’m a lot colder, harder, stronger. And deader.
Review By [lucyferr
] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Three" from lucyferr
Constantly there was talk about, “what Ronon did when he came here”. Ronon was no woman that got groped everywhere he went and Ronon had no supernatural creature sleeping in his chest. Ronon was not more animal than human sometimes and Ronon still had some ruins of his old life to cling and go back to from time to time. But most of all, Ronon didn’t have inhuman senses that picked up on everything that happened for fifty feet around and Atlantis was not humming her childish joy at finally having company again in his ear.
good fast explanation of differences between her and Ronon
The fight, once it had started was over almost too fast to follow. Buffy didn’t bother pulling her punches, she just didn’t aim to kill. Within seconds all five of her opponents, some twice her size and trice her weight, were on the ground, motionless. Two had broken noses, one several cracked ribs and one a broken leg.
well she got the message across
He didn’t necessarily agree with what Buffy had done but he understood that she thought it was needed. He understood that when Buffy thought something was necessary, she would do it, no matter what he said. She’d been alone for too long, in this galaxy and her home, to really rely on people. She might ask his opinion, but it was a long way to go until she actually listened to his answer.
love the way Ronon explains it and... gets her.
“They have to know Slayer before they can meet Buffy. I can’t let my guard down around people who don’t know how to handle me.”
would she have said the same about the scoobies? But... no, it's not the same.
“Say that I want to get along with those people because they belong to you and I want them to like me. Alright? Are you happy now? I said it. Buffy the monster wants to be loved.”
wow she said it aloud
Now the blonde just shrugged and said, “It’s a long story.”
Determined not to let this chance pass, the older of the two women nodded, “Let’s find some coffee then.”
good for Weir... she was totally freakzoided earlier.... good of her to want to sort it out.
“When I first arrived here I told you that I was a weapon. You listened to it, you agreed and you didn’t understand at all what I was talking about, did you? You didn’t. No-one here did. ...If you’ve got a loaded gun, you don’t leave it lying round in the open and invite people to test the trigger.... I pulled the trigger myself under controlled circumstances and showed you what damage the gun could cause. Crude, I’ll admit that, but effective.”
She remembered that within ten minutes of arriving, Slayer had had Rodney by the proverbial balls, telling him never to touch her again without permission. The warning hadn’t lasted longer than a day.
er - Rodney's not representative... of even scientists.
A predator made prey is not a nice sight to watch.
nice line, don't think it's true, it's only true if you're the predator-turned-prey at the time
Up in the gallery Elizabeth had to turn a blind eye on the furious betting that was going on while most of her people were cheering loudly.
“I think this is exactly what everyone needed."
...there were still fights going on about who had won. Buffy because she beat Ronon, or Ronon because he was currently getting real lucky.
I rather doubt that's going into any of her written IOA reports :-)
“There are, you know?”
“People who care.”
“I know. I’m trying to get used to it.”
was the incident too harsh? well, the five men will never judge that easily on appearances again. but harshness is irrelevant - it was fun to read, and that's all that matters. It's not like we're reading this for edification!
so yeah, still with the liking.
Review By [lucyferr
] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Two" from lucyferr
“Look, I know you swore that oath and all that, but I don’t fucking care about your morals right now! Cripple me or kill your team with your hesitation. Your choice, Doc.”
she's a lot more polite than I'd be in her situation. Of course, in her situation I'd be suffering a serious case of dead.
Then, muttering some Athosian curses that made Teyla blush prettily
and where did the good doctor learn those? ;-)
Buffy smiled weakly into his chest. There was no greater insult to him than being compared to that which he hated most and he seemed to include her in that. It was actually kind of cute.
for normal people, I'd say awww, but given these are runners, it would be - well, insulting
Her voice was dismissive and cold making it clear that she thought of him as a burden and annoyance more than anything else.
There was a moment of silence before a snort escaped her and she nodded, “Yeah, I’ll tell the head geek to stop being so mean to you.”
Slayer’s exasperated cry of, “Dex!”
Beside her Ronon stood a little straighter and asked silkily, “You rang?” In that moment, John knew he would be chewed through and spat out by the doctor later for introducing Ronon to Earth’s version of entertainment.
Ronon knew how hard it was to let your guard down sometimes, to be human after acting like little more than an animal for so long. He understood the effort it took her just to let him touch her when she was defenceless....He was the only one she shared her greatest and deepest secret with. The secret being that she had a heart.
Wonder when the Mrs Ronon - or more likely, the Mr Slayer - jokes will start. Very very very far from their hearing though
Review By [lucyferr
] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Not Rated