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Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from RavenMorbisk
Review:
Hey, why haven't you updated this?
this is really good..
Review By [RavenMorbisk] • Date [26 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from prettyragdoll
Review:
I love this story. i hope you update soon
Review By [prettyragdoll] • Date [25 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from castofftheday
Review:
What the frak? Finally get a flashback of the party... and to be continued. I love this story. (My only twitch is that you killed Backup, but story wise, I understand why you did, which is why it's a "twitch" and not a "complaint".) Please say you're going to keep writing? I am hooked on the Faith/Veronica interaction. Can't wait to read more.
Review By [castofftheday] • Date [23 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from war
Review:
good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [23 Jan 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from CPTSkip
Review:
Lol! Now that is a cliffy! But we have nothing to worry about because Willow's spells always work perfectly, right? And what is up with the Buffmeister? I look forward to another update with much anticipation.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [11 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from war
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if the spell works I think Beaver's life expectancy just dropped to zero when Faith finds out.good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [11 Jan 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from prettyragdoll
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I think this story is brilliant so far. I can't wait for you to update. Faith and V def need to talk
Review By [prettyragdoll] • Date [8 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from CPTSkip
Review:
I really love your Joyce. She is one cool mom. But, my god, Xander is going to have his hormones self combusting all over the place with his mental imaging of what six beautiful and sexy women do when they are all living in one house. Lol! I look forward to more of your very interesting story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [5 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from theweirdchick
Review:
Aww I want a Joyce dammit. Good job on this chapter. Update soon. :)
Review By [theweirdchick] • Date [4 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from CPTSkip
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Dang! More Teen Angst. But I do love Dawn and her hero worship of Faith. And I am glad you are putting Joyce more heavily into your story. Not only is she one of my favorite characters, but I think both V and F need mom-figures in their lives. And Joyce is a good mom-figure for the whole Scooby Gang. Thank you for the quick update and now I want more. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [1 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from CPTSkip
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I liked this update. It is sort of nice seeing Faith vulnerable for once. I'm definitely wanting more of your story. I can't wait to see how V and Cordy get along. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [28 Dec 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Idmonscat
Review:
So Faith and Veronica, an interesting pairing, though I have to agree with a previous review, did you have to kill Backup. Hope that they make it to Sunnyhell in one piece as I can so see Veronica driving Buffy even more insane than Faith did.
Comments from author:
I feel pretty bad about killing back up if that makes you feel any better! It was the only thing I could think of that would push the plot in the direction I wanted it to go. To drop in a little hint of what’s to come this isn’t actually the last time you'll see him in this fic. I'll leave you to ponder that. Thanks for commenting!
Review By [Idmonscat] • Date [27 Dec 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from CPTSkip
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Oh, I so hope Veronica comes to save Faith's butt from old Car-keys. Lol! While the whole 'sleeping with Faith' was a bit abrupt, I can actually see Veronica doing it. V now has no Dad, no friends, and had just lost Backup. She had nowhere to go and no one to help her. And then there is sexually stimulating Faith to just be there for her in her hour of emotional need. I actually think they could be a great couple. F the killing machine who needs someone to love her and V the tactical and strategic brain helping her Slayer/lover out. Now you need to add Mac for computer support and Wallace for the moral boosting and everything is Jake. Lol! I look forward to more of your interesting story.
Comments from author:
The sleeping with thing was extremely abrupt hey! It probably one of the only ways to kick start a relationship with Faith. Ok not entirely true but it sure saved a lot of fussing around! I’m glad you think the pairing could work btw, I hope I can do it justice! Thanks for reading and commenting!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [27 Dec 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from pcody
Review:
Mysterious beginnings, with interesting potential as you develop the story. Who gets involved in whose world?
Comments from author:
Its mostly going to be buffyverse focused, but i desperatley wanna drag some of the Neptune crew into the picture. I'm not sure how yet but its definatley the plan. Thanks for commenting!
Review By [pcody] • Date [26 Dec 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
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Not only is this a kick-butt start, you have both Faith and Veronica in the same story! Two of my favorite characters and you are pairing them up. Too cool. I am a bit put off by the vamp killing Backup, but I would love to see what V's taser does to a vamp. I hope you bring Mac and Wallace into your story as I think they both would make great Scoobie II members and I just like them a lot. Please update quickly as I really want to see where your story and characters take us.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [25 Dec 06] • Not Rated
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