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Review of chapter "XI. Hello! You're Life's in Danger" from (Past Donor)KieriToews
Review:
Pretty good story so far...
Review By [(Past Donor)KieriToews] • Date [21 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XI. Hello! You're Life's in Danger" from (Past Donor)Strangevisitor
Review:
I was really enjoying this and waiting for the Dean/Hermione hook-up. Any chance you are going to continue this.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'm slowly working on the next chapter, which should be out hopefully in the near future. I thought I'd finish it before summer, but things got busy at work for me and I kinda "abandoned" this fic for a while. But I'll be picking up where I left off pretty soon.
Review By [(Past Donor)Strangevisitor] • Date [31 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "VII. Next Targets" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
Good chapter, but one thing... Occlumency is used to occlude thoughts against Legilimency - the casting spell used is 'legilimens'. The HP Lexicon is THE BEST resource for ANYTHING used from the HP 'verse.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I use that site as reference as much as I can.
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [28 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "IV. Having a 'Feel' of the Place" from Rod
Review:
Interesting. I like the way you plot, but you really need to get a beta reader. Your tenses are all over the place, and some of the dialogue doesn't work terribly well. Intriguingly you seem to handle Dean and Sam better than Hermione, and much better than Buffy and Xander. Still, for all the grumps herein I definitely encourage you to carry on!
Review By [Rod] • Date [29 Dec 06] • Not Rated
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