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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WolfWriter
Review:
Pretty scary thought; having a Vengeance/Justice Demon being 'M'!

Although, it makes perfect sense when you think about it.

This really needs a sequel, just to see what James would do to get a hold of Angelus, especially if he's being protected by Buffy, in spite of arguments from Giles and Xander.
Comments from author:
I've got too many unfinished stories to take that one on - I really think this works best as a stand-alone anyway. Glad you liked it anyway.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [4 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from serenityselena
Review:
interesting story ^_^
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [25 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
Someone directed me to this story after reading my DADA ficlets collecting and suggesting James Bond. I must say, I *love* this idea. Well done!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [7 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Rune
Review:
This is so so so good, too good, its good enough to make me want a sequel.

Tell the story of Bond in SunnyHell, I'm sure it will be an explosive tale.
Comments from author:
Maybe one day...
Review By [Rune] • Date [29 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
One of these days, Marcus, this needs following up on.

The thought of an older, still deadly former 007 tearing a broad swath through Sunnydale is just too good to be ignored.

I do have to say, it may have been by the workings of the wish but the Kalderash finally being sensible enough to let vengeance be undertaken by the experts is refreshing.

And Lady M being one of the followers of D'Hoffryn makes perfect sense.
Comments from author:
It's one of a number of sequels I'd like to write if I ever have time, but at the moment my fanfic writing time is very limited and I can't say it's likely to happen soon.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [23 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
M. I didn't think you had it in you... I always knew M was impressive, but damn. That was one hell of a twist.

Yes, I believe that Bond could have fathered children and then left the picture, he was much too much of a 'ladies man'. And that life and death, living on the edge thing tends to get people's hormones going...

So, a man that looks like Sean Connery as dad... Wow. Wouldn't want that Bond after me, even if I were a 250 year old vampire.
Comments from author:
Definitely. Especially someone who has just heard that his only child was murdered.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [27 May 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RippersGirl
Review:
Interesting choice for the daughter! And M as a vengeance demon, I didn't see that one coming. It'd be interesting to actually see Bond in Sunnydale trying to avenge her death. Great story.
Comments from author:
I'm just too busy with other things to write fanfic at present - hopefully later this year.
Review By [RippersGirl] • Date [27 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from banner
Review:
* cold shudder *
Well Done.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [banner] • Date [28 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)Kiwikatipo
Review:
Hey wow its a real family story!

Like how Bond is retired, his cover story. He was happy to be a sperm donor for the gypsies eugenics programme eh? Well it was the sixties I suppose.

And the twist with M - perfect.
Comments from author:
Thanks - the whole thing is James Bond canon, from the original book From Russia With Love. There's a fight in which several men of the gypsy tribe are killed. Bond helps fight off the bad guys, he is then asked to help keep the tribe going by making love to a gypsy girl whose fiancee(?) has been killed, so that she will have a strong son. And does so, then goes off without any thought of taking responsibility for any child.
Review By [(Moderator)Kiwikatipo] • Date [8 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from aewnaur
Review:
oh shit.. now that was unexpected and freakin cool..
Review By [aewnaur] • Date [10 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BigHead
Review:
Good. Surprising ending.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [BigHead] • Date [2 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from purrfus
Review:
Vengeance demon with a job, and what wonderful potential for havoc. What specifically is her area of expertise, or is being M just something she does for fun?
Comments from author:
I think it's simply a job that lets her fulfil a LOT of people's wishes, one way or another, and as you say cause lots of havoc.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [2 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Wow! Loved the twist at the end.
Comments from author:
Thanks - it seems to be one of my more popular stories.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [1 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ShadowWolf
Review:
I'll add my call to the list for more - I know you have many WIPs and only so much time, but this is truly intriguing....
Comments from author:
And I'm afraid I have to give you the same answer as everyone else - maybe, but not planned, and not soon if ever.
Review By [ShadowWolf] • Date [1 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
Wow. Completely bizarre, never saw the end coming. Cool.

Edit after comment: I didn't elaborate, sorry. What I should have said was - M as a vengance demon is plausible in the whole sceme of things, but not expected that it was her until the end of course.
Comments from author:
This is what I don't quite understand - the title is "retribution," and I use the word "vengeance" twice in the first section, but nobody seems to have spotted that ending coming. Thanks for the kind words.
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [1 Jan 07] • Not Rated
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