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Review of chapter "When You Wish Upon A Star" from (Past Donor)James
Whoa, what an awesome series. Looking forward to more soon. Nice addition of Rachel Summers, but you are right that you don't want to forget the focus of the story.

But now we have a paradox, of Willow goes back to the waaaay past (her former present), to stop things, the that future will not happen. As for that code, holy cow! It made my brain hurt just thinking about it. But it would be simple to program a computer to translate it.

Comments from author:
I guess the advantage of writing this as a series is that you can go off on tangents and do a bit more about Nathaniel and Rachel if it's needed and if I can think of anything worth writing, but having put Willow in this situation I have to get her sorted out first ....

Now the paradox - that funny you saying that cos in the next chapter I have a bit of a Willow mini babble going on as she tries to figure out the same problem - hope to have this up over the weekend - it's off being proof read and criticized as I write .....

Yeah the code - I thought I had to do a wee bit about that as I decided it wouldn't be fair to any readers just to say "It's a code - here's the translation" If it's any consolation it made my brain hurt trying to think it out and trying to see if it worked .....
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [19 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "When You Wish Upon A Star" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Ouch. That's a lot of responsibility.

Rachel Summers? Heh :)
Comments from author:
yeah I reckon nothing in life works out the way you plan it - but you got to play with the hand you are dealt ..... a little twist on the whole slayer gig!

As for Rachel Summers - well it leaves options open for a few ideas on any other stories, but then again I might not run with it - I need to try and remember that this is Willow and Tom's story.

Thanks for commenting.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [5 Jan 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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