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Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from melissouza
Review:
I am so sad to see this story hasn't been continued, I was really enjoying the parts that were already out. I do hope to see more in the future!
Comments from author:
I will!! I want to but I lost the notebook I'd been writing the story in! Plus, R/L's been a bitch lately, but I'll try and find it and find time to update ASAP.
Review By [melissouza] • Date [14 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from RevDorothyL
Review:
I'm really enjoying Faith and Nigel, and now that we're getting a bit more info about the mystery of this Institute, I'm even more intrigued.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [21 Feb 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
Yep, most definitely a complication here, as well as a big break. Excellent chapter, I'm looking forward to your next update!
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [18 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from purrfus
Review:
I came back to re-read this and found a new chapter. : ) The question that has been nagging at me is: especially if Faith is aging very slowing how could Riley not recognize her? Did he hit his head, or in this AU just never meet her or see a picture?

Fourth chapter really intriguing, but the end was way too abrupt. Is the girl supposed to be a seer or something? Why did she just agree to get in a vehicle with a strange woman and man?
Comments from author:
yes, she does age slower...and why this girl would get into a car with two weirdos is part of why chapter 5 is so long in coming.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [18 Feb 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Marcel
Review:
A little too terse at the end... you prepared us for a crazed young woman on the run, and then she just follows Faith to the car?

Other than that, the story is nice, even though the chapters are way too short. I don't have time to "immerse" myself in the story with such short chapters.
Review By [Marcel] • Date [18 Feb 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Good on Nigel for being smart enough to take Faith out in the first place and open-minded and courageous enough to handle the truth. Wolfram & Hart just screwed up big-time, though. I mean, I thought the forces of Evil had finally figured out that NOBODY goes after a Slayer's boyfriend, if they know what's good for them?
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [7 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from purrfus
Review:
Intriguing, and I don't just mean Riley and Nigel in the first three chapters. Nice balance of questions raised and answered so far - can't wait to see what happens next.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [6 Feb 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
I'm really loving this, and hope that you continue with it. *crosses fingers* You've got the characterizations spot on, so far.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [27 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
Excellent story so far, and I like how you've set up the tone of the Boston ME's office right away. I'm in for the long haul on this one and look forward to reading the rest of this. :-)
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [27 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Cutiepie
Review:
Cool! I like this one. Faith and Jordan, two of my favs. I'm tracking you now, so I won't miss any updates. =]
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [6 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Thanks for adding just enough exposition in this chapter to make the story plausible.
Comments from author:
well, that's why I generally try and post a story when it's finished...wanted to get this one out here tho, and now I'm remembering why it's better to wait til I'm finished to post stories.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [6 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from VillageOrchid
Review:
An intersting concept so far... but we're talking Faith -- four years (or at least 3 years excellerated) college, 4 medical school, some work in LA and now...? Need a little more perspective on how the mid-to-late 20's slayer is so mellow.
Comments from author:
Don't worry...all will be explained. And she's not as mellow as you might think...just didn't think her new colleagues wold be cool about her crazy side.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [6 Jan 07] • Not Rated
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