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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Luhh
Review:
Hi, i'm still reading you history so i can't say if i like it yet, but you may like to know that is Rio de Janeiro not Rio de Jenairo. I'm brasilian, i should know =)
Review By [Luhh] • Date [11 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from SilverWave
Review:
Great!

Thanks :)
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [28 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Rossell
Review:
"First her boyfriend, her first ever steady boyfriend, disappears after a recruiting mission, along with his entire flight."

Wow ... his entire flight is missing??
Tell me what did Faith's boyfriend take Adam Air, by any chance??
That flight was missing since January 1st and has not been found .... yet. It did have several Americans as its passenger.
But recently there is clue about the founding of the black box in the bottom of the ocean (2000 m to be exact)

Did you maybe take 'inspiration' from this tragedy?
I hope not
Comments from author:
This is actually a refference to Lost, and a fic I have started but not yet finished or gotten posted here, in which Robin Wood is one of the surivors of Flight 815. The title escapes me just at the moment but I hope to have it posted soon(ish)
Review By [Rossell] • Date [31 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from fastpilot
Review:
Well, I'm kind of freaked the fic is set in Winchester, VA. I live in Boyce, like ten minutes away.

I keep on imagining running into the characters in Target or Home Depot now, thanks.

Are there any clubs like that in the burg? Or is the club fictive?

Anyway, the plot is going places, descriptions are good, and I'm looking for more.

Thanks, fastpilot
Comments from author:
I went to Shenandoah University, and lived in Winchester for a year and a half after graduation:) Lane and her scoobies live in Winchester as well, but Julianna and Club Nation are in DC. Lane was simply the closest slayer at the time to contact her. Nation was an actual club in DC, thursdays were Goth/Industrial night, called Alchemy. It has since closed down.
Review By [fastpilot] • Date [9 Jan 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from WhiteWolf
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Poor Spike ehh William.

I can't believe that Faith is dead. That's no way for a Slayer to go especially Faith. It seemed like she tripped a booby-trap or was it an accident. I don't need the answer now, I'm sure you'll tell us when you're ready.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [8 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Kate4
Review:
This is awesome--I never really thought about how the Watchers would seem to an outside observer.

It's also weird (but in a good way) to read a story that takes place somewhere I've been--it's making me miss Nation. (You know it closed a couple of months ago, right?) My friends and I used to go to Alchemy on Thursdays often.
Comments from author:
I did know, I was at the last Alchemy myself. I miss it too.:(
Review By [Kate4] • Date [8 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from CPTSkip
Review:
Lol! Great action scene, just like I'd hoped. Your story just keeps getting better and better. Thanks for all the fun.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [8 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from grd
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I hope Spike/William gets some good licks in on this pathetic organization. Spike's just going to "love" being caught by another government organization. Hope he busts some heads on the way out.
Review By [grd] • Date [8 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from CPTSkip
Review:
Very cool update. I love your Marshall and I like your OCs. Plus, you made me laugh out loud several times so thumbs up from me. It looks like the fit is going to hit the shan real soon now. I hope you update quickly as I need a bit of the old ultraviolence, droog. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [7 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from SamJames
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Interesting set up. I assume that the military's knowledge about Buffy and company are kept secret from the other branches of the government such as the CIA and XFiles. It will be interesting to see if Faith really stays dead.
Review By [SamJames] • Date [7 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from grd
Review:
Loving the setup. Looking forward to the CIA getting their ass kicked and finding out their intel was so wrong. I hope your Watcher's council has connections to higher government officials, ie. the Royal Family. I've always enjoyed it when government branches trump each other.
Review By [grd] • Date [7 Jan 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from KnightOwl
Review:
This sounds intriguing so far. I sure hope this is a Buffy story and we get to see her in the action. I'm looking forward to reading more and seeing where you are going.
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [7 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Kneazles
Review:
This seems like an interesting story. I like the outsider's view on the actions of the Scoobies and Slayers. Also I love the implication that the government doesn't necessarily inform important agents to things that might be important (like the Initiative--and yeah I know it was a super secret project, especially since the top level of the military gave orders to watch the Scoobies to make sure they didn't squeal.)To change the status from Complete to Incomplete just go to the story details link and change it there.
Review By [Kneazles] • Date [7 Jan 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SevenMagic
Review:
I ask only two things: change your notation that the story is complete, and PLEASE make Faith's death a red herring. I don't want Faith to be dead! She's my favorite, and this story looks so good. Why couldn't it have been Kennedy? I don't like her much anyway. =]
Comments from author:
Yes I'm working on figuring out how to do that with the entry. Sorry 'bout that. As for Faith. All I will tell you is, remember, this is Alias. ;)
Review By [SevenMagic] • Date [7 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JasonBarnett
Review:
Couldn't you have used some generic newbiw Slayer instead of Faith?

Still it was very interesting the way they set the Watchers up as nuts.
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [7 Jan 07] • Not Rated
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