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Review of chapter "Ritualistic Presentations - Booth/Brennan (Bones)" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Nice work with Brennan's voice in this one. And thanks for the long-delayed satisfaction of seeing these two formalize their partnership in more ways than one.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [9 Apr 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Breaking His Word - Mal/River (Firefly)" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
Not a pairing I've thought of but nicely done....
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [4 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Breaking His Word - Mal/River (Firefly)" from jupitersdaughter
Review:
that was pretty sweet
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [4 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Breaking His Word - Mal/River (Firefly)" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Really like the way River refers to "YoSaffBridge" (summarizing and dismissing the many faces of Mal's one-time "wife").

But I did notice that one sentence seemed to be unfinished (no ellipses, even, to indicate it was supposed to trail off): "as her fingers trailed over the chair and " [that's where the paragraph and sentence ends]
Comments from author:
D'oh. Lack of sleep = slow brain and even slower fingers. It's been fixed. Thanks
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [4 Feb 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Making the First Move - Danny/Lindsay (CSI:NY)" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
Nicely done....now if the show does half as well!
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [28 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Getting Down to Business - Abby/Adam (NCIS/CSI:NY)" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
LOL....thanks for a nice morning treat....
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [23 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Open Your Eyes to This - (Angel/Xander)" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
Yep Xander always did see everything...any chance of longer chapters????
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [16 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Taunting is Naughty - Dawn/Dean" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
Yep taunting is naughty! and funny....especially when done by younger sisters....
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [11 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Death is Not a Proper Gift - River, Rube" from jupitersdaughter
Review:
very cool
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [11 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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