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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireWolfe
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I hope that this work is not dead. IT has so much potential pardont he pun. I want to see how Sam handles it.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [20 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from jebbypal
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Interesting set up.
Review By [jebbypal] • Date [19 Mar 14] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Willimer
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I really hope you continue this story
id love to see some Buffy and Jack interaction, I love how alike the two are, the blond acting dull routine they both do as a defence but both being such great leaders, and ive always thought Buffy would be able to help Jack properly grieve Charlie's death
hope you have more for us soon
Review By [Willimer] • Date [27 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from etraytin
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Interesting story, a different twist on the monk-built memories, having them strengthen a reality that isn't actually real. I'm really liking your characterization for Faith as well. I'd love to see more of this story!
Review By [etraytin] • Date [18 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Ember
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I don't even like Stargate but I'm so obsessed with Buffy I'll read almost anything, that being said, this is an amazing story and I really hope it doesn't end up abandoned! Love the relationships you have between Faith, Buffy and Dawn but what is up with Faith and her random weakness and pains? Does she have a disease or something mystical going on or is it really just old slayer age? I love this story and I really can't wait for the meeting, please update again at your earliest convenience and Happy Holidays!
Review By [Ember] • Date [22 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from bradsan
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read it again and still waiting for a update.

Hope it won't take long because I want to read more.

Oh can't wait for Oz to show up. Wonder how he will react when he find out the threw Buffy out or her own house without any weapon to defend herself. I still don't like Riley. Riley is good looking but he already proved you can't trust him. He has nothing to do with the missing potentials I hope. I know nothing points at him but I can't shake the feeling he knows something.

Owww Ripper is showing. Putting Kennedy with Andrew is so evil. Still think he made a big mistake letting Kennedy and Buffy work together never mind the reasons he gives.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [14 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Compston
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Very interesting story Can't wait for the next chapter and hopefully soon Buffy and Sam will be reunited.... and they figure out why a lot of potentials are disappearing...
Review By [Compston] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Compston
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Wow its getting a little better...
Review By [Compston] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Compston
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Another chapter down
Review By [Compston] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Compston
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Interesting chapter and a little confusing at the beginning. But, at the end I think I know what your going for. It looks like it will work. Keep it up....
Review By [Compston] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Compston
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Interesting story. Let's see where you take it.
Review By [Compston] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Selonianth
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Little frustrating with how long it's taking to reunite the sisters.

Good besides the frustration though, needs that to happen so stuff can happen... feels almost like a holding pattern for the past three or so chapters.
Review By [Selonianth] • Date [16 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from mscecilyunderwood
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I have read this story thrice now and its still good...not getting old at all...so i do hope you update soonest...may your muse find ample inspiration and real life give you a few moments respite so your loyal readers may feel glad again! Thanks for sharing your creativity!
Review By [mscecilyunderwood] • Date [20 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from EmberQuill
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Before I say anything, let me just say that I really like this story. I really like the backstory and how you weaved Carter and Davis into Buffy canon.

But honestly, chapters 8-12 feel like aimless musing tacked on to a story that is otherwise completely stalled. While I do definitely love character development, and believe it's an integral part of any story, it's not the ONLY integral part. The plot is important too, but that aspect has been entirely neglected for five chapters now. After Major Davis met with Buffy, nothing else has really happened. Nothing much happened at the meeting either, as Major Davis was called away for unexplained reasons before he even told them anything, and nobody from either group has followed up on this yet. None of your central plot threads have advanced at all since then. There hasn't been any interaction at all between the Scoobies and the SGC since then. And you've gone so deep into introspection that you're starting to go in circles. Faith has had more or less the same train of thought about Buffy's past several times. Sam has planned to discover what her teammates are hiding several times.

Your first seven chapters almost seem like an entirely separate story at this point, due to the huge shift in tone and especially pacing starting with chapter 8.

I really want to like this story, and I really love the direction it's going, both in terms of character development as well as the plot itself, but the plot isn't going in any direction at all right now.
Review By [EmberQuill] • Date [28 May 13] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from locard
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This is a very good story and one I hope you don't drop. Please don't wait to long to put the next chapter up
Review By [locard] • Date [17 May 13] • Not Rated
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